| "Kyu wa murasaki des. (Today is purple)" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 15:33 CDT
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only read first chap so far but souds interesting =) Gotta say...that's a lotta fucks you put in there ^__^
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Reviewed By: Sweetums128neo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 17:31 CDT
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WHY DON'T YOU F-ING UPDAAAAAAAAATE?!?!? -grabs you by the shoulder and shakes you unmercifully- Seriously!
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Reviewed By: Karesu On: January 25, 2006 11:48 CST
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About damn time you updated, Now I command you to write more! MORE I SAY! FUCKING MORE DAMNIT!
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Title: HURRAY!
Reviewed By: DaixDarkFan On: January 06, 2006 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!! Finally the DaixDark stuff will begin! YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
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Reviewed By: MME On: January 04, 2006 20:43 CST
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Haven't read it at all, but you're title is wrong. If you're writing "Today is purple" it would be written "Kyou wa murasaki" you don't really need "desu" what you have written isn't even Japanese...
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Reviewed By: Karesu On: January 02, 2006 12:43 CST
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Took you fucking long enough to update!
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Reviewed By: Tsubasa no Tasogare On: December 24, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As soon as I opened the page and realized that you'd updated, I think I managed to pull off about three backflips and a sommersault straight into the pool. *Hallelujah Chorus playing in the background* Soon, I was nice and dry, and ready to read the conclusion to your story. And now, I will sit here, twidling my thumbs, and waiting for you to start with the part I've been waiting for the most. DN ANGEL!!! ^.^ btw, never underestimate the power of a good author's note. I for one, like to know how you think, because then it makes the story much more interesting, and allows me to make educated guesses about what might happen next. So keep those notes coming!:)
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Title: Whee!
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!! ^_^ I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death (who forgot to log on) On: September 16, 2005 17:01 CDT
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I am very fond of this story, and have been following it for some time now. But I must know...you don't REALLY dislike Satoshi, do you? The boy is a prodigy! And what do you think of Satoshi/Daisuke as a pairing? It is more than obvious, in both the anime and the manga, that Satoshi loves him. I just think that Satoshi deserves more credit, because I wuv him. Please update soon!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: DXD rules!!!!!!! On: September 06, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool so far though what i'm DYING for is DaixDark!!!!!!! I can't wait for it! I hope it's coming up very soon!!! AND btw: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: AnimeAngel27 On: August 28, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done, nice work. I've never seen a cross over between DNAngel and Yu-gi-oh, very original. You're characters have interesting personalities and although i understand your reasoining for using certain words, I think you could still pull off the interesting personas with out such vulgar language. But keep up the good work, can't wait to see updates!
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Title: F***ING AWESOME
Reviewed By: Raiyne On: August 16, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a good fic, I like the cussing, reminds me of my family! anyway, I hope that it keeps going....I wanna know what happens with Yugi over!!!! keep at it!
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Title: DxD forever!
Reviewed By: DaiDarkFan On: August 16, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for DxD!!!!!!! I love it! Dai and Dark are so sexy and cute! They're the best pairing ever! I hope you update REALLTY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!! I love the title too by the way! this fic fucking rocks! Its the fucking best! Go you for using fucking so much in it too! Update super soon! DxD FOREVER!!!!!!!
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: DarkSoulBlackHeart On: August 04, 2005 20:35 CDT
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I love this fic and you need to write more biatch
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Reviewed By: tonic On: August 02, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* and the plot thickens...ignore the other picky bastards, they can't have much of a life if they enjoy correcting other people's japanese over the internet...I have a suggestion, though. I can understand the cursing, you know, character developement and all, but it's a little stilted. Just alternate "fucking" with "goddamn" or "damned" or "cocksucking", even. Most people who curse a lot tend to use more than one curse word. hake it up a it! Other than that, great chapter, hope to read the next soon.
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