| "Lean on Me" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Hey!!
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like MPREG fics.Although this one is very well written (like all of your other works) and since I concider you a friend and I respect you a a writter I just had to let you know...Gambatte ne!!
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Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a fascinating story. You have to continue. Or maybe write a fic with the backstory for this one. It's great! I always wanted them to cuss Goku out for his behavoir. Please keep going.
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Title: don't feel like logging in
Reviewed By: Plyric_to lazy to log in On: May 29, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! Definitely keep going! I've always wanted to hear this story told this way!
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Title: Chappie 1
Reviewed By: Plyric_too lazy to log in On: May 29, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! Definitely keep going! I've always wanted to hear this story told this way!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: May 29, 2004 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the beginning I was very confused. I found myself reading the first few paragraphs a couple of times because it jumpd so quickly with no explanation. The beginning is a bit choppy. But as I continued to read the rest of it, I found the fact that it was so confusing set the fics mood. You can almost feel the characters desolation. I want to know more about the story, and would've like it to be longer, but I'm afraid too much insight will lose the true melancholy of the piece. I really enjoyed it.
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