| "The Outside was so Beautiful" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Ying-Yang-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz continue!!! i dont like cliffy's !!!! Argh!! damn plz contiune!!! i luv this story so far!!!
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Title: the outside was so beauitful
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww cute story keep writing you have that fruitsbasket thing down which is good you haven't really changed anything much only adding a new character.keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 07, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love your story! Hide-chan is soo cool! I love how he looks like Yuki and he's Akito's younger brother!I hope you develop this story to more than a few chapters, because it really got me interested! I want to find out what's gonna happen...what will Akito do? O_O; Ooh scarry. *^_^* Well keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for that update!
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