| "My Brother's Keeper" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c@aol.com On: November 14, 2004 22:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! it so filled with cutness and I love the bonding but it anit bonding to seshoumaru at least. I love it!!!! ^__^
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Title: Cute story!
Reviewed By: Kagome lover On: August 29, 2004 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has got to be one of my favorites!You keep the charcters in charcter,while still making the story awesome! I have seen no spelling errors,which is nice to see.The story itself is very creative,and very enjoyable to read.All and all your story is a work of art,no a masterpiece.But why are you not updating?Oh well,your story is still wonderfull,keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: jc On: June 23, 2004 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very cute, and sure shows the other side of things, maybe you should write a scene where when theyre practicing, inuyasha gets attacked by another youkai or something... anyway, keep the chapters rolling in, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh I really liked that! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thinks Sesshy's got a softer side. And him curled up with a toddler Inuyasha! Kawaii! Great style and form as well, the writing is excellent. Thanks for sharing! :-D
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good update soon!
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Reviewed By: BlackX On: May 29, 2004 04:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
One word: cute!!!
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