| "Kiddy Bakura" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Ishtar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! I love it! ...keep writing! *Glomps the little Bakura.* I wuv j00 Kura-yami. *Kisses him.* ^^ Good story!!
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Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That started very well. At last a chibi fic that doesn't read like a chibi actually wrote it! Please continue this story. There's enough description for the narrative to make sense and the use of the English language in the story is sound (i.e. no spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes.) In other words the prose avoided most of the mistakes that normally go with this type of plot. Of course it's not very original but at least it's well told.
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
goodness... turns into a kid huh...hehe
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Reviewed By: *name censored* On: June 16, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmm...This sounds intresting, update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O shadi is REALLy OOC in this fic you realize...
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