| "Until Him" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't delete this. I tottally love this fic, it'd be like a sin or something to delete it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT DELETE IT. Just put it on hold and update when you get a good idea for the next chapter. i love it just the way it is. bye now, inulover
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I re-read the story again and it's so awesome! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW HOW COULD THAT HAPPEND
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like reading your story i hope you update it went you get home.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Though this idea is not getting points for originality, I\'m always up for a InuYasha/Kagome & Miroku/Sango fic. This seems to have a nice start to it. I will ask you to do two things. Please don\'t make them fall for each other right away. I consider it lazy when people say \"There is something different about him/her.\" And then they are in love. There other thing is that your description of Kikyo could have been better. (I am in no way a Kikyo lover but...) There is only so many times you can use the words \"cold\" and \"lifeless\" in the same paragraph. Using other snyonyms (forgive my spelling) and recycling the already used words interchangablely will keep your writing fresh. Other than the fact that you rushed Koga into the \"my woman\" phrase, I enjoyed the story thus far. As long as the storyline is good I will continue reading. Oh, I don\'t think it\'s strange they started school that late in the week. The schools here often do this to make certain you have the weekend to get the supplies required for class. Though it is usually a Wed-Thrus.
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey....great cliffhanger...hope u update soon so we can all findout whos "he" is...lol...
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