| "Massage Parlour" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DNAngelDark On: April 29, 2005 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have to update soon! If you don't I'll cry!
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Reviewed By: llxsunset_mikixll [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON I WANT TO FINISH READING YOUR STORY
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Reviewed By: blakat On: July 26, 2004 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I SWARE BY ALL THE GODS I NO ILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND FORCE U TO FINSH THIS STORY!!!! Oh and if u didn't notice i liked your story.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Ryoko3600 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story sooo far!! Do continue pretty please!!!
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Title: Fabulous
Reviewed By: volostheguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this STORY! I was surfing mediaminer for an hour before I found this story. You deserve some more credit, because the plot line was nice, the sex good and while your writing style was shaky, that's okay mine's is too.
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