| "And then my Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Robert Delaney On: August 26, 2004 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Five possibilities. 1: Kodachi 2: Nabiki 3: Kasumi. [Everyone knows something has to be wrong with her.] 4: Nodoka. [She's allready been proven crazy VIA the Seppuku pladge.] And finally, 5: Ranma's cursed form. I like reading incredibly violent 'DarkFics' like this one. Yes, I realise that Kodachi is actually the most likely of the five, but I felt it would be good to list all the possibilities. Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: R.Kelly Mask On: June 02, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a little ruff reading it but I still enjoyed it. Its probably could be two people Nabiki or Ranma curse form, second you need to put attempted before manslauter considering she didn't kill him.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good story. the "confession" was a little painful to read.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 02:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
it had to be nabiki
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