Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, let's see... I like the premise of the fic, what with young Touya meeting Yue. I thought the idea was original and interesting, especially how Yue tells Touya to call him Yuki (and we all know who Yuki ends up being... ^^) I also liked the fact that it was set way before any of the CCS manga/anime, and that Nadeshiko was included. If you continue this story, I would like to know more about what influence Nadeshiko had. I guess... I'd just like there to be a point in us watching her die. However, there were many grammar errors that irritated me (not in a bad way, of course, but I'm an English freak and I like to have good grammar) Anyway, I noticed that this was posted a long time ago, so if you don't continue the story I understand.
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