| "A Hated Husband & A Hated Father" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey please update soon. I really got into this.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is different but I like it so please update I'm interested in finding out what's gonna happen.
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Title: me likie story
Reviewed By: Nanner #7 On: June 04, 2004 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this it turnig out to be a good story i really like it and i think u did a good job with making Onigumo the evil husband. please write more... i want to know what happens to the baby like whether and one catches her or if he catches he and says somethin about how if he talks back to him a gain she will drop her out the windor next time just a thought. write more soon
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