| "Enslavement" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
As far as reading a fun little fic, this is great. But this is a story, not a chat, and I think you should at the very least keep your authors notes at only the beginning and/or end.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: MaskedGod On: October 29, 2004 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story plz update I want either Shinobu or Kaolla to be next
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Reviewed By: def3PO On: October 25, 2004 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
looking forward to more
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Reviewed By: RedLightning [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
by the way have an orgy chapter or something like that let Keitaro have sex with em all
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Title: GOAL!!!
Reviewed By: RedLightning [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First interesting Fic i've seen in a couple of months. CONTINUE!!! pls...
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Title: A bit of a delay
Reviewed By: DJ Lord Isaac Minamoto X On: August 20, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now people I know that you have been waiting for the third installment of Enslavement,well i have to ask that you wait just a little bit longer. My computer is broken and I can't upload anything at the moment.
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Reviewed By: Stelok On: August 11, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. please continue. I want Keitaro to fuck Shinobu and Kaolla.
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Reviewed By: dgfgjgj On: August 09, 2004 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
update, man.
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Title: pppow with tha wicked shit!
Reviewed By: jennay On: July 25, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a story with an actual plot! I thought the next chapter would be quite different from the first since someone else was writing it, but nope. It was fantastico. Kept my attention. Blah blah blah. You know it's good :-p
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Reviewed By: FlackPack On: July 22, 2004 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hurry up, man. We seriously want to see what happens next!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yaisel On: July 12, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. Very few mistakes in spelling and grammar...a good, original idea...I liked it a lot. Keep this one going.
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Reviewed By: Chorp On: June 28, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, DJ and RPGer, I'm tired of coming to this site, and leaving because you haven't updated. Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, also, I rated your story well because I't pretty good, and I'm a fan of it.
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Reviewed By: Fifty Points of the Mind On: June 17, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sh*t man, this is great! you've got to update man, and fast. I'm itching to see who's next!!!
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Title: best love hina fic ever
Reviewed By: kenshinlover06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enslavment has to be one of the best fanfics that i have ever read please update the next chapters i would like to read more.
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Title: Me likey!
Reviewed By: Oxi-Nu On: June 13, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely the FIRST fic like it that I've read. Nothing else like it. Anywhere. I really wanna see how this turns out.. keep writing, please!
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