| "Enslavement" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Ohlawl.
Reviewed By: DJ Lord Isaac Minamoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm surprised this fic got 20 reviews, considering my creative writing talents were shitty back in the day. I'm surprised I actually remembered the password to this account. Reading over this story, I can see that it needs a major overhaul in just about every department. Now that I feel I've become alot more mature in the aspect of creative storytelling and in general, (xD)I'm considering redoing this story. Only catch is it will all be done by me. (I can't get ahold of RPGer and I don't think he cares for fanfics anymore.) I'll also rewrite both of these chapters to suit my new style of writing, and then come up with new content from 3 onward. I'd also like to hear suggestions from other readers/reviewers, so drop me a line and let me know what you'd like to say, and maybe I'll throw it in. :3 As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Title: Roflmao
Reviewed By: NobleCrusader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going guys....ur making me go roflcopter!!!
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Reviewed By: frikinIdiot [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
U DISSIN BUDDHIST MONKS!!??!??!?! DAM U IF U ARE! IM BUDDHIST!!!
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Title: Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BlackJudgment On: June 09, 2005 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you want,I could give you guys some ideas for the fic. If you accept, email me at darkbuddha669@yahoo.com. p.s. RPGer, I admire your work on your fic called Same Story,Different Guy. It's THE BEST fic I've ever read until this one.
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Reviewed By: warriornite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story excellent and original idea. UPDATE PLEASE this is the best love hina fic I've everseen please don't leave it unfinished
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 02, 2005 08:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great story. Upadate soon
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
As far as reading a fun little fic, this is great. But this is a story, not a chat, and I think you should at the very least keep your authors notes at only the beginning and/or end.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: MaskedGod On: October 29, 2004 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story plz update I want either Shinobu or Kaolla to be next
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Reviewed By: def3PO On: October 25, 2004 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
looking forward to more
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Reviewed By: RedLightning [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
by the way have an orgy chapter or something like that let Keitaro have sex with em all
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Title: GOAL!!!
Reviewed By: RedLightning [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First interesting Fic i've seen in a couple of months. CONTINUE!!! pls...
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Title: A bit of a delay
Reviewed By: DJ Lord Isaac Minamoto X On: August 20, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now people I know that you have been waiting for the third installment of Enslavement,well i have to ask that you wait just a little bit longer. My computer is broken and I can't upload anything at the moment.
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Reviewed By: Stelok On: August 11, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. please continue. I want Keitaro to fuck Shinobu and Kaolla.
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Reviewed By: dgfgjgj On: August 09, 2004 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
update, man.
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Title: pppow with tha wicked shit!
Reviewed By: jennay On: July 25, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a story with an actual plot! I thought the next chapter would be quite different from the first since someone else was writing it, but nope. It was fantastico. Kept my attention. Blah blah blah. You know it's good :-p
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