| "Alone is Only a Word..." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:16 CDT
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Hey, keep udating please. This story is better than you think, and I want to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:03 CDT
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Whee! You updated! Please continue! I like it!
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames2 On: June 25, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Wow been there. I danno for some reason I'm feeling this narrator as Ryou... the "little boy, big eyes" comment made it stick out more... but then I thought well little boy could mean Mokuba or Yugi... Mokuba would be an interesting concept but it doesn't completly fit with all the descriptions of his life... I'm sticking with Ryou... typical but almost always the best writers tell his tale... I like it... update when you get a chance The *Queen Of Games*
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Title: I'm yo loyal fan
Reviewed By: joeyrules But I am Emily...Mwaha. On: June 23, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It. Does. Not .Suck! Love it....good job on continueing it....who is it?!?!? i heard little boy with big soulfull eyes...oO Is...it...meh Yugi? EH? O.O
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Title: What the-? Where the-? Hey!
Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 10, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the hell is the rest of the story! I want to know what happens to Jou(assuming, it's him) asap! Waaa, evil, evil, evil cliffie-but great story!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Aww, it doesn't suck! I loved it! Keep up the great writing! And when ya get the chance, please update Rain and Fire!
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