Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good you should make more chapters and make them more intresting like not make Shinji such an idiot I mean not even Ash was that bad!
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