| "The Insidious Plot" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: hey yah
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's a gteat story so far update soon kurosai to arigato
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 17:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it. update soon.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps*/Rin:Rebekuka becomes speechless too often.../Because Rin, we always pick the best stories to read!/Rin:True, true, but Rin is never speechless!/Because, you are too talkative!/Rin:Oh yeah...
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Reviewed By: sesshy luver143 On: June 03, 2004 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont care if this story is short. it is good so far. your spelling and grammar is ok but you should probably reread thru the chapter before you post it. don't get me wrong i dont really like to either but i try. it doesnt always work. hmm. anyways good job i cant wait for the next chapter.
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