| "For Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:04 CDT
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AHK!!!! WHY!!!!! I HOPE BULMA BECOMES QUEEN!!! HMMM, I WONDER WHATS IN THE BOX? GREAT CHAPPY!!!
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Reviewed By: heiresstothethrone On: July 13, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duh duh duh!!! o man the cliffies! what would life be without the cliffies? alot more boring that's 4 sure! great job. this is definately different and exciting. did i mention the ominous cliffies. i just love them. in almost every b/v fic i've ever read there is a love triangle with bulma vegeta and some other character. i can't say i love them but i cant say i hate them. they definately make the stories much more interesting though we all know who ends up together 95% of the time. but i don't want to jinx it yet. plus we dont know how they end up together so it works. more blood and gore and definately more lemonade please. if u write ill read and review. its only fair! until next time.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 13, 2005 20:24 CDT
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well I think that's who he plans on making his queen... good chapter... ^_^
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Title: Chapter 6!
Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in again!!) On: May 02, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love it! Your this chapter is great!!OMG I am so happy you are updating more and more! Just keep it up! I just checked on it today (5-2-05) and I was like yah she updated!! You should check out my fic sometime and maybe you can give me some advice because mine is also a B/V vampire fic!! lol Well thanks for updating and I am watching out for more lol!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:05 CDT
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go check out the changes I made to my one shot... I'm going to start all over with day by day... but believe me it will be worth it... and I'm going to have another fic out to you by July as well as changes to day by day... so read the one shot and be happy til then...
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: April 19, 2005 00:31 CDT
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you know what, it has been to long, my yummy veggie, my hunkalisious junichi, and my babe raditz have missed me and we are happily reunited in ur story! i cant belive we haven't talked in so long! you should email me nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: April 17, 2005 22:11 CDT
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yeah... I'm trying to get on it... I mean I did post another fic but I'm working on school stuff... but that ends next week and then I have to do a couple little side fics... don't worry you'll get to read them but I'll have to talk to you on the side about those... email me... or I'll send you my aim name... this was a great chapter and I loved the situation you've put them all in... b and v def. are into each other and veg def continues to pursue her you'd think that they'd finally settle it but no guess not... alright so I'll get on it and hopefully get back to my fics when I feel inspired you should def. come seek out the dbz fanfic salon... I think a link is in my profile... its a great place to discuss and give and get feed back... girl you should def. stop by...
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Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: March 27, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jees! its been sooo long since you reviewed I am happy I saved it and checked on it today because other wise I wouldn't have known!! I love the story!!! I can't wait for another chapter to come out so hurry, hurry, hurry!!!! Love it !
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Title: oohh
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 17, 2005 20:44 CST
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sexi vegeta gets to work up a sweat!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 17, 2005 18:22 CST
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someone got some inspiration... that was excellent... I can't wait to wee where you are going... and one day I'll update mine again...
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 26, 2005 20:04 CST
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nananananannanananananananananana scary
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: February 26, 2005 18:41 CST
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great job on the new chapter... is someone else after bulma's attention
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Reviewed By: veggiespal On: September 01, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: KageRaven On: September 01, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Vegeta's Mate
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic I hope to see more soon! You've got to give me more of this fic or I'll go nuts! Keep up the fantastic work! Vegeta's Mate
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 04:55 CDT
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i want...................an update with wonderous updateabilities(not real word) vegeta so hot
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:18 CDT
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ooohh update plz i think im in love with, yet again, another one of youre stories. bravo
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: June 09, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Here's your review so you better update soon... this looks so good... I like the idea and just can't wait to see what you plan to do next with it... I will be waiting for the next chappie
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: June 02, 2004 20:34 CDT
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interesting... I can't wait to read more and see where you are going with this
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