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Title: My god!
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfiction. So full of drama. It's really good that Trunks was alive in the end. Seneca would not be pleased. This was one of the most original stories that I have ever read, and I would love a sequel ^^ -- MaraiTrunks --
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Title: Fantastic Story!!!
Reviewed By: starangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!!! couldn't stop reading it, finished at 11 on a school night, I'll be cursing you in the morning, But right now it's worth it! are you writing a sequel? or are you just continueing with it from here? Having Trunks die at the end of the last chapter was so heartbreaking!!! Then to bring him back in the next chapter! You are my new favorite author! I'll reccomend you to anyone who loves DBZ fanfiction! Though your story was fantastic, you did confuse me with some grammar mistakes. I under stood what you were trying to say though so its all good! Again GREAT story! Loved every second of it!
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in On: September 21, 2005 08:57 CDT
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About time! MONTHS!? you can't do that! that's evil! what am I going to do until then? maybe i'll should just sleep....
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Title: ..................
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 20, 2005 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooooo. cant wait, man ur stories are are so so ....... perfect
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: mlf(maccam) On: September 20, 2005 22:29 CDT
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ICAN'TBELIEVETHATYOURWRITINGASEQUALHUGSYOUSOOOOOOHARD... Ok i'm back to normal and happy that your going to write this *SMILES* as i go to sleep...*HUGS*
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Title: forgot something
Reviewed By: me again, free-sprit, not logged in On: August 30, 2005 09:06 CDT
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I forgot Seneca! what about her!? It's gonna destroy her! Bulma and Bra goes to earth, and they collect the Dragonballs and then thery wish trunks back top life, right? Pretty please? he can't stay dead, it's just now right.
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: free-sprit - not logged in On: August 30, 2005 09:04 CDT
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I was so sure, that I never finnished this story, so I decided to read it again. AAAH! Why did he have to die? whywhywhw? I mean, I cried! they had searched for him in such a long time, and then he just.... *sighs* I loved the story. Please please please please write a sequal! But don't you dare write it yet, finnish Finding Peace first, and then start on a sequal to this. Maybe just a one shot to show how tings really ended, or how things gonna look in the future. K? I would love that. And many others would love that. Your writing is quite popular. Thanks, love your writing, byebe
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Reviewed By: Person. On: February 25, 2005 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh... that is SOOO sad. :( I wish things could have been different but... i guess it makes sense in a way. thats so sad that Trunks is dead and he never fully lived his life with his family and girlfriend. and that he never fully got his memory back!! but anyway... will a sequel work? but it was a great story non-the-less.
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooo this can't be the ending really truly the ending..>.< but why this story is great and for you to just end it..poor trunks and the rest of the family they didn't get a chance to be with him .and his girlfriend on earth..ohhhh i can't stand this. the ending is not what i was hoping..i know we don't have happt endings all the time, but damn..anyway i'll miss this story VERY MUCH!!!! and i'm sorry that it's over.....maria
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Reviewed By: jkashfuidsf On: February 22, 2005 22:02 CST
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umm....that was a gay ending....you had the best story and u ended it liek that? i will change my opinion if theres a sequal...cuz there are to many loose ends that u didnt tie up....but yeah..i mean the ending was okay...but really confuseing and ....not that good you could do better. over all good job
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Title: ehem
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 22, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tell theres a sequal!
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Title: What?
Reviewed By: Sluggy who is too lazy to sign in On: February 22, 2005 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh... That wasn't an ending. There had better be a sequel because there are WAY too many loose ends you need to tie up. Overall good, but yeah... the THE END was just confusing.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: February 21, 2005 23:23 CST
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que? the end... tell me there is more... its so good... ok I really liked the story... it had a great build up and the b/v was well written good job
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Title: master of slugs
Reviewed By: Sluggy who is too lazy to sign in On: February 11, 2005 12:08 CST
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There's no way you're ending it like that, right? Right? Geez, can Vejiita stand any more guilt trips in his lifetime?
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Reviewed By: FreeFallin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Omg... I wouldnt have expected this to happen! Tragic! ohh... I wish Trunks could have survived. Vegeta beat Kooler so thats good. He killed him right? But still! Its sooo sad! Hope, just hope, Trunks makes it somehow... Great Story by the Way! So sad that its ending.
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was browsing through the many fics here, hoping to find some new and refreshing fanfiction. Then I found your story, and I fell in love with it... There is nothing more I say but: UPDATE! I'm dying to know what will happen next!!!! Your story is original, new and simply amazing, bravo! ^___^ Blue Dragon
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Title: poo
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 03, 2005 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
youre not gonna leave him dead are you? what about his fiance'
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Reviewed By: Kat8125(not signed in) On: February 03, 2005 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching. I hope trunks doesn't stay dead but...seems very unlikely. I know the ending is near and I can't wait to see how your going to wrap this up.
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Title: Keep going!
Reviewed By: FreeFallin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... two more chapters... This has been a great story!! I've been following this since chapter 2! Im a loyal reader of this story! Hope it has a good climax! Vegeta! You rock!
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Reviewed By: Kiflam On: January 23, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just fell in love with your story! I really hope that Vegeta and the Saiyans get back Bulma and defeat that evil Kooler! I also hope that Trunks gets his memory back. Hope you finish the story!
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Title: 'So Blue
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg only two more chapers..ok crying here...and bulma going with tht monster for her children man who said she was WEAK.. yes and the fight finally..i really don't wany this to end but i can't wait for the next chapter...maria
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: FreeFallin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far. Keep it going!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i want to cry please please don't let that monster hurt those kids please.(how many times can i say it so you won't let that happen) please please..lol update soon...maria
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 10, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
know would be a good time for father and son to meet and go super together to save their love ones...great chapter update soon please ...can't wait...maria
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Reviewed By: Random person.. On: December 10, 2004 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really hope Trunks gets his memory back soon. But still... a little action and suspense cant hurt. Just please! Finish the fic! To me, its been a long while since you updated, and i got scared that you gave up on the story or something!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 04, 2004 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so glad that trunks is at least talking with bra..and i can only hope that thing will work out...please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: November 18, 2004 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. I'm in the brink of tears. And shivering in from excitment. oh my god... poor Trunks is gunna go super saiyan! He ALMOST remembered his memory! Seneca is the key! maybe... Man oh man! I really need to read the next chapter! Best Alternatve Universe Fic of All Time!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 18, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man it seems to me that trunks is on some BAD drugs...when will he snap at of it..and how come vegeta the mighty saiyann can't feel that his daugther is in trouble...with that update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: November 10, 2004 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Person Random. On: November 10, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaay! They made up! But the war is brewing and so is Trunk's energy! Its really good that Trunks felt something when seeing Bra. Wonder what he's going to feel when he sees Goten! Can't wait!
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