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Reviewed By: mlf On: November 09, 2004 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no words just update..maria
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 08:59 CST
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Nooo!!! Kooler what have you done to poor, innocent.....cute.......sexy....*lol* Sorry, I kinda trailed off there. I hope Trunks comes around soon.
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: November 04, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was surely suprising. I wonder when Bulma and everybody else are going to find out about Trunks. Can't wait! Oh, and Trunks was brainwashed!!! Evil Kooler. Hope alot that He gets his memory back. Maybe meet up with Goten? That should get his memory up and running again. Thanks for updating fast. Please update again!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 04, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok lets see.kooler took him and already he has forgotten his family on earth and the ones who love him.i know that he was with kooler and he druged him but come on this is a little far fetch...how can this be..he saw the pictuer of his mother or and father.i don't know about this chatper i'll have to read more...maria
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Reviewed By: Random Person! On: November 02, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!! Can't wait at all! PLEASE!! Get the next chapter here!!
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic but, I don't think leaving the fanfic in a cliffhanger is very funny. The story was going so well and i was actually getting answers to the questions that i'd been asking myself all along and you end the last chapter with what might as well be a "to be continued". That's not very nice. I think you need to update and quickly because i'm already getting antsy. OH-- and suprise me please.
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 01, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't complain about what bra did.some of us did things in the name of love at one time.so i won't judge that.they are in love and thats all i;m going to say about it.as for vegeta he followed his instincts as a parent there had to be something in that boy he saw to risk everything on and i commend him for that.lets say it's fathers instincts...i just want to read on what will bulma think about all of this...oh and i REALLY hate cliffhangers!!!!!..update soon maria
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Reviewed By: Jody [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so great it is not even funny. After I read it i had to add my own personal review to your collection of them. Its great that Vegeta found Trunks and that Klooer didn't touch him too close. I think Bulma is going to regret what she told Vegeta when she finally meets her son but then again with her pride she could employ her selective memory banks and corrupt the data to suit herself. Oh well. As for Bra and Goten I hope that what they are doing in that room is talking about their problems and not adding to them because she is a sixteen year old child and she is very young and Goten is going to treat her selfishly and take away something that she needs and should keep for at least a couple of years. I just hope that when Vegeta finds out if my obscured theory does not follow through that he indeed does kill the bastard and dance a good dance on his grave. As for Maddox and Raddiz I just hope that some good comes out of this but then again some probably will because in stories we tend to lend ourselves as writers to happy endings. And I want a happy ending I just am not sure how it will come about. Jody
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Reviewed By: Person Random. On: October 27, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yaay! You updated! Liked the hole flashback thing with both the couples. Wonder whats going to happen when Trunks gets to the planet. What happened to Goten and Bra?
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 27, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope that bulma can remeber how it was with her and vegta.maybe that will help them too.wonderful chapter a great change i can't wait for more so update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Random person. On: October 23, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah... I was shivering of anticipation during the whole chapter!! That... that... that was awesome. I could have never thought THAT would happen. Vegeta took Trunks with him! I always thought that Kooler would keep him for the longest time. Good thing that didn't happen though. Soo... Is a war going to happen or something? Goten Bra? Just the whole Trunks/Arcadia thing?! OMG! I can't wait! What... whats... going to happen?!! Can't wait for that next chapter.
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 22, 2004 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more.please can't wait sit on the edge of my seat ...omg he has him...now let the fighting begin..maria........
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: October 19, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Wow! A whole step towards the actual storyline! Omg... is Vegeta and all the other saiyans (and the humans) (and everybody else) going to find out about Trunks/Arcadia now?!! That would be soo cool! I hope Arcadia and everybody else would be good. Then again, it wouldn't be a good story if there wasn't atleast one problem between them. I hope that he gets his memory back too. Can't wait for the reactions! Also, Bra should find a way to get around Kali's request and be with Goten! Vegeta and Bulma relationship should be stable still too even if Vegeta broke a promise again. AAH!! To much goods happening!! Love, LOVE this story! Keep it going! I check on this everyday and hope it updates!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 19, 2004 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhh i'm sitting at the edge of my seat...you just don't know how much i want bra and goten together.i feel so bad for them in this story.i know there is love there...and vegeta he won't be happy with what he sees...update ASAP!!!!!maria
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 17:31 CDT
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::wipes tears from eyes:: awww that was so sad....but it was a beauitful chapter! Great job!!! I love this fic, can't wait until the next chapter! keep up the awesome work!!!
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