| "So Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor kali poor bra poor arcadia/trunks
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon...maria great chapter.but i don't want her with him only goten...lol
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 04:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooohhhh some ones pissed
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Reviewed By: Some Random Person. On: July 30, 2004 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story! I love this story! I love this story! I love this story! Man! The chapters keep on getting better and better! But where's Arcadia? Whats going to happen to Bra? What about Vegeta and Bulma's relationship? Are they ever going to find Trunks?! And last of all, Did Vegeta almost turn Super Saiyan?!!! I can't help but scream! AHHHH!!!!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 29, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now thats what i'm talking about...go get that kid and bring him to his parents already.but i know it won' t be that easy oh please....anyway can't wait for the next chapter...maria.
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Title: This Story ROCKS!
Reviewed By: Some Random Person. On: July 28, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo!! Its been a while since I last read ur fic. (I was on vacation) But WOW! U made this story even better than i remember! Please let Goten and Bra be together! And the same with Vegeta and Bulma! What happened to Trunks?! Is he ok?! AHH! This is one of the best fanfics I have EVER read. Please keep on going!
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Reviewed By: Leigh Kat On: July 24, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!! Bulma and Vegeta have to be together!! I think Turles is just crazy for going after Bulma, who obviously is already taken. I think Kali and Bra should not be together, because she and Goten should be. Thank god that Goten can finally understand her, or it would have been a very complicated relationship. Well, just update ASAP!! This is like one of the best stories I've ever read!! I love your writing!! Well, bye!!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 24, 2004 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read the last three chapters.i wnat to scream.why did he say that he's died.i know that he wants to keep him but this is his family and i just want them to be together.i'm happy that goku has his father,but i feel for bulma nad vegeta.how long are you going to let them suffer like this..i want them to be together and i know that you have to put them though this it's hard to read..they've been though so much already and i just want to see them happy for a change.so please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Emily Marie On: July 23, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!! please?!?!? This is a great story. I luv it so much!! Bra and Goten belong together, so I hope in the end they get together. thx so much. update ASAP!!! toodles! ~Emmy
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Title: UPDATE HURRY!!!
Reviewed By: Christnalooloo On: July 21, 2004 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 10, 2004 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Will Vegeta find out that Bulma is cheating on him? I hope that you update soon!
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 08, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no no she did not cheat on vegeta. i know that they are going though a hard time right know but why to cheat it's not right.i'm so sad....they love each other and i know that they hurt because of there son not being there.but for there family to brake up like this os so wrong.i like your story but it's hard to read...but good so far.maria
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Title: upsate soooooooon
Reviewed By: sillydragon2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg. i need to read more. plz plz plz update soon.
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 05, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh too short..i want more...please update soon maria
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 01, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow very powerful.can't wait for more...i feel sorry for her.i hope things will get better for them.
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