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Reviewed By: Some Random Person. On: October 12, 2004 15:57 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ohh... Kali died... Oh well! lol. It was sad though, now Bra has to get over Kali until she could be with Goten. But what about his last request! How can Bra get around Kali's last wish and be with Goten? Whats up with Trunks? This is too much! Keep Going! Update! (oh! glad your still updating, i got worried for a sec that u got hurt from the hurricanes)
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh yeah you gave us what we wanted but with a price.and now the story has take a world of it's own.how sad for someone to put a burden another but saying what he said about GOTEN.i wish that they could be together but now i see that it might not happen.life is to DAMN short.and you have take what you can get. this chapter was very sad for me.i don't know about the rest but i fell sorry for them both...maria
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Reviewed By: Some Random Person. On: September 29, 2004 17:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOAH!!! Now THAT was a chapter!!! Thank goodness that Vegeta (and Bulma) let Bra and Goten together. I just hope that it'll last goodly. The dinner with the Sons... I hope that'll be good too! Oh! Hope your still good and stuff after all those huricanes!
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Reviewed By: Bobby Greg On: September 28, 2004 20:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great Fanfic! It's really creative and good. Keeps you at the edge of your seat until the next chapter! I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens to Goten and Bra's relationship!
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: mlf On: September 27, 2004 22:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yes yes i want them together soon..but i know she has to wait until she is 18 but thats good...and i'm glad that she had the talk with her dad.nice chapter.sorry that your getting pounded out there.we are praying for all of the people of florida...update soon ...maria
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: September 23, 2004 20:49 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow... thats was just great. Awesome awesome chapter! Oh gosh!! I cant wait till the next one! Whats going to happen to Goten!! And Bra!! AHH!!
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: mlf On: September 17, 2004 20:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: as much as i want to believe that it is for the best i think that he's going through it the wrong way. sometime you have to follow your heart..i can only hope that it gets better because his dauther is going to be the death of him...maria
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Reviewed By: *~Raven~* On: September 15, 2004 18:32 CDT Comment/Review: Awesome story! Keep it up.
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 19:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'm sssssssssssooooo glad that they are finally coming together.vegeta and bulma are a very strong and loving couple.rates up there with the best of them...and i'm glad that your bring goten and bra together to.i only hope that there is a way for them to be together...and i loved the slap on the face...classic...update soon......maria
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 19:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'm sssssssssssooooo glad that they are finally coming together.vegeta and bulma are a very strong and loving couple.rates up there with the best of them...and i'm glad that your bring goten and bra together to.i only hope that there is a way for them to be together...and i loved the slap on the face...classic...update soon......maria
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Title: so blue Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 19:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'm sssssssssssooooo glad that they are finally coming together.vegeta and bulma are a very strong and loving couple.rates up there with the best of them...and i'm glad that your bring goken and bra together to.i only hope that there is a way for them to be together...and i loved the slap on the face...classic...update soon......maria
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: September 02, 2004 17:02 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thats sooo sad. :( Poor Trunksy, he has no memory what so ever. Kooler is pure EVIL!! EVIL!! EVILL! Please! Please! Update soon! and PLEASE! Let this be an at least somewat happy ending. poor Trunks's parents. oh please! update!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 31, 2004 11:14 CDT Comment/Review: woohoo go goten!!!! Go Bulma!!!!!!! poor kali don't kill ur self!!!!!! stupid turles!! Big meany raditz!!!!! Vegeta got stamina!!
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: August 31, 2004 00:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oops! On my last review, I accidentily put an overall rating as 9/10. It really should be a 10/10!
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Reviewed By: Random Person. On: August 31, 2004 00:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehehe... Goten and Bra madeout... Finally, been waiting for this since forever! And not only that, Vegeta and Bulma did a scene as well! Still waiting for Trunks... GOTEN AND BRA FOREVER!!! Whoo Hoo!
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