| "Give Me Eyes To See" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: MatsuyaHime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! ^_^ I hope to see it updated. Keep up the good work. You're adorable, Ryou. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you can update this more often, cuz I love it.
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Reviewed By: mallery On: December 11, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! I cant believe it! i have been checing back for so long, and when I saw you had a new chapter, you dont know how thrilled I was! I feel kinda sorry for Ryou, but I still want him to get together with Marik. ^^ but not to soon. Well, keep up the good work! hope you update sooN!
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Reviewed By: divastarz 63 On: December 10, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAH!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
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Reviewed By: darkyami On: December 10, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated! ^^ i am so happy! i love your story so much! please continue!!!
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Title: you updated!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yippee, *does crazy dance* wow, you have no idea how long Iv'e been waiting. I checked your stats practically every day. anyways, I like the story, it's funny seeing yugi and ryou are all, well, polite. Is their gonna be a lemon scene between Bakura and Marik. If so, don't forget yugi and ryou. It's a really original story, so keep going and don't you dare forget internal scars plz update soon please update soon
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not gonna attempt to eat you, I'm gonna STRANGLE you! Where have you been for 6 months? Awww... forgot about Deme? Lol.. anyway! THANKS a million for finally updating. I STILL love this story and am still a loyal reviewer. Heh.. I wasn't expecting Bakura to be Ryou's cousin, but oh well.. that's cool. Man, I'm loving the umm.. immediate attraction Marik and Bakura have towards each other. I shouldn't even say that, 'cause for the most part, it's just them wanting a good lay. No? Prove me wrong. But PLEASE update soon, I've been waiting so long! Oh and ugh! You threw Yugi into the picture. Lol.. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: darkyami On: October 27, 2004 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god that is so good! Please! you have to update soon! i really really really like it so far! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
[Punches Marik] DIE ASSHLOFF! Grrr...how can Marik be so cold!? One minute he's mean, then he's nice...I hope Malik comes into the story to balance him out, soon. :B FOURSOME.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 15:25 CDT
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[Punches Marik] DIE ASSHLOFF! Grrr...how can Marik be so cold!? One minute he's mean, then he's nice...I hope Malik comes into the story to balance him out, soon. :B FOURSOME.
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Title: *sparkly eyes of sparkleness*
Reviewed By: Cody Saoyrn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD "...very VERY gay..." *cracks up* ...Rockin' awesome! This is the best AU I've ever read...[just a question though--Marik, is this Malik's yami, or dub Malik?] *glompage* Ano...Cheese for you!
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Title: @_@ Must have more
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfiction!Yes,I also like Marik being soo mean.....afterall sadistic IS my favorite kind of fanfictions(check my fanfic Bakura's Lust if you want to see Bakura rape Ryou alot....lol)..and bursted into hysertical laughters after reading about Marik saying "I'm VERY gay"!Ryou seems so cute in this fanfic!!Hehehe!!!He thinks about the sexy egyptian....I wonder who that could be....*glances at Marik*...Well Got to go....buh byeness!!Love,Ashtin
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Reviewed By: Kirei na kanjou On: June 10, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this, but y did u make Ryou like a rich brat? * pout*, j/k, I like the personalities of ur char.'s, Marik is sooo gay, and sounds so hot, but a big meany! But I love him, *daydream about Marik*. Anywayz I thought this was great, I wanna hear whats gonna happen, do type fast! j/k, Sabrina
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: June 06, 2004 21:41 CDT
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yay! gimme a roasted marshmallow Ryou!!!wwhhheee toasted marshmallowwhhe! i'm the fifth reviewer...unless i'm writing too long and somewone else does it forst! so ya that was good but you make malik sound too mean! and boy thats one immature 13 year old! bad ryou! bad! Ryou: ;_; awww... don't cry ryou! *huggles* you will give me the marshmallow right?That wuz a really cute fic!
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Title: I LIKE IT!
Reviewed By: Deme, too lazy to login in On: June 03, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! This is so original, it's awesome. So sweet, and innocent.. too bad Ryou can't see properly, that must suck. Lol, horny Marik, and why doesn't Ryou want Bakura to come? Please, update this soon, and all of your other yummy stories too ^^ Thank you.. Meep
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in On: June 03, 2004 06:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
hee, I like it, update soon please!
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Title: Sweet.......^-^
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 03, 2004 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! As much as I'm looking forward to Internal Scars, this is a welcome distraction! I love the story line, it's really origional, and the whole bit with Marik being all "I'm VERY Gay" had me laughing for like, 5 minutes straight. *tries to breathe normally* ^-^ I really like this one! Keep up teh good work! -Love, Arina
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Reviewed By: Shredded Soul16 On: June 02, 2004 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story line hehe. Poor poor Ryou *sniff sniff* Playing an insturment is like being a slave i swear it! Especially when your parents consider you good at the thing. It ends up running your life. Poor Poor Ryou
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