| "Disillusioned" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: minado [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woow, that was a twist at the end. Unexpected. Angsty though. xDDDD Poor _____. I don't know who it is, but it sounds like Kyo. Meh, that was very harsh of her. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: killer pepper On: June 23, 2004 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
>< tell me who it is i cant wait your story is really good gah cant wait! please tell me email me a floyd_elone_less01@yahoo.com please!!! @_@;
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Reviewed By: HelloKat On: June 04, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright...you've got to tell me who this was! I do love the Tohru moment--talk about the "Brutus". She makes him look like a harmless person! Very original...not that I hate the character...just tired of all the gooey too perfect description of her! I hope you can continue to see how the others would react to this! Email me if you want to keep it a secret for now...kittyalert27@yahoo.com!
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