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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit On: February 17, 2005 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! luved it UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Supercool On: October 09, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off let me say your lemon of Inuyasha and Kagome was excellent. You shouldn't be worried about the rape scene there are more important things you need to look at in your story. First Kouga is so totally Out of Character it is laughable I mean if you read the manga or watched the anime you would know that he is hunting Naraku & Kagura because they killed some of his pack mates and vowed revenge for them so why would he let Akumu your main bad guy get away with it. Secondly your Dialogue for chapter especiallly between Inuyasha & Kagome was truly stupid, do think Inuyasha would make sexual jokes about Akumu to Kagome while they were having that dream. I think not. If you could get the characterization better this had the makings of being a excellent story. Maybe refreshing yourself with the anime or manga might help.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What another WOW chapter. Getting sooo serious! I love this fic, it is sooo good! Hope InuYasha saves Kagome soon!
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: September 13, 2004 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a fantastic story... i feel sorry for Kagome, no one deserves to go through something like that... anyway, great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Kagome Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: tsujita_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!! I am very dissapointed in kouga however (tsk-tsk.) Kagome needs to give him a apanking.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I don't remember reviewing your story before, so I figured I would. I wanted to respond to your decision of removing the rape scene There have been many stories that I have not agreed with as far as a certain scene or whatever. But I think the main thing that you are forgetting is that this is YOUR story. Many people may not have liked the sex scene, but at the end of the day it doesn't matter. The decision of what or what not to put in your story is yours and yours alone. Do not let the words of someone else deter you from writing anything. The rape scene could have been essential to your story, and as such I feel that you should have kept it if YOU wanted to. I know the loss of readers is stressful somewhat. But you have to understand that you should not compromise your fanfic just to suit what others think and feel. If someone don't like it...fine. That's there opinion. You shouldn't fuss over loss of readers more than the ones who are faithful to your story and plot. I know I'm ranting, but I just feel that you removed the rape scene not because YOU felt it should go, but because you were listening to what other people were saying. This is YOUR story. And I know that you want to be a good author and have lots of fans, but part of being a good author is doing what you feel. They are not the ones writing your story, you are, and as author you should stick to what you want. Just to let you know, I'm still a fan of your story either way:)
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Title: Aww so cute...
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, she got raped by Kouga and Akuma. Dang...I kinda hope Akuma likes Kagome slightly. I mean I know he is very evil but I do kinda like him a little now that he mated Kagome. Poor Inuyasha though. When he finds out he'll be heartbroken... See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Title: HOLY F*CKING COW!!!
Reviewed By: Hakari Yuki On: August 14, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! DUDE! That is SOOO cruel! Leaving us with such a cliffie!!!!! You Suck! (J/K) This fic totally kicks butt. WAY better than some of my own. Please, please, please, please!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ktakn On: August 09, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T so sad keep going
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a cliffhanger! Oh my gosh, I have got to know whats going to happen!!!! Such an awesome story! So full of suspense.
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Reviewed By: Cold Demon Lord On: August 08, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did have trouble getting through this chapter. Rape is terrible. I don't see Inuyasha resting, he would push himself to the death to protect Kagome especially if she was kidnapped by Kouga. I just don't see Inuyasha getting Kagome anytime soon in your story and I cringe with having Akumu raping her over and over again before Inuyasha or somebody else saves her and being mates as well. So I regret that I am not going to come back to your story but I wanted to leave you a last review.
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: August 08, 2004 16:10 CDT
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I really didn't like this chapter. I mean Kagome is not Helpless she is a miko and can purify Youkais and in the show usually when she is in a life or death struggle that's when her powers flair up. It was solidly written again but with the rape and Akumu taking control over Kagome I don't think I will continue to read.
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf On: August 08, 2004 16:04 CDT
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Up to this point I was enjoying it but unforunately you lost me after the lasy chapter. I don't read anything with rape. Sorry! Good Luck with the rest of your story.
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