| "Adi (Odi) Et Amo" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: tsujita_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!! I am very dissapointed in kouga however (tsk-tsk.) Kagome needs to give him a apanking.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I don't remember reviewing your story before, so I figured I would. I wanted to respond to your decision of removing the rape scene There have been many stories that I have not agreed with as far as a certain scene or whatever. But I think the main thing that you are forgetting is that this is YOUR story. Many people may not have liked the sex scene, but at the end of the day it doesn't matter. The decision of what or what not to put in your story is yours and yours alone. Do not let the words of someone else deter you from writing anything. The rape scene could have been essential to your story, and as such I feel that you should have kept it if YOU wanted to. I know the loss of readers is stressful somewhat. But you have to understand that you should not compromise your fanfic just to suit what others think and feel. If someone don't like it...fine. That's there opinion. You shouldn't fuss over loss of readers more than the ones who are faithful to your story and plot. I know I'm ranting, but I just feel that you removed the rape scene not because YOU felt it should go, but because you were listening to what other people were saying. This is YOUR story. And I know that you want to be a good author and have lots of fans, but part of being a good author is doing what you feel. They are not the ones writing your story, you are, and as author you should stick to what you want. Just to let you know, I'm still a fan of your story either way:)
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Title: Aww so cute...
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, she got raped by Kouga and Akuma. Dang...I kinda hope Akuma likes Kagome slightly. I mean I know he is very evil but I do kinda like him a little now that he mated Kagome. Poor Inuyasha though. When he finds out he'll be heartbroken... See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Title: HOLY F*CKING COW!!!
Reviewed By: Hakari Yuki On: August 14, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! DUDE! That is SOOO cruel! Leaving us with such a cliffie!!!!! You Suck! (J/K) This fic totally kicks butt. WAY better than some of my own. Please, please, please, please!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ktakn On: August 09, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T so sad keep going
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a cliffhanger! Oh my gosh, I have got to know whats going to happen!!!! Such an awesome story! So full of suspense.
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Reviewed By: Cold Demon Lord On: August 08, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did have trouble getting through this chapter. Rape is terrible. I don't see Inuyasha resting, he would push himself to the death to protect Kagome especially if she was kidnapped by Kouga. I just don't see Inuyasha getting Kagome anytime soon in your story and I cringe with having Akumu raping her over and over again before Inuyasha or somebody else saves her and being mates as well. So I regret that I am not going to come back to your story but I wanted to leave you a last review.
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: August 08, 2004 16:10 CDT
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I really didn't like this chapter. I mean Kagome is not Helpless she is a miko and can purify Youkais and in the show usually when she is in a life or death struggle that's when her powers flair up. It was solidly written again but with the rape and Akumu taking control over Kagome I don't think I will continue to read.
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf On: August 08, 2004 16:04 CDT
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Up to this point I was enjoying it but unforunately you lost me after the lasy chapter. I don't read anything with rape. Sorry! Good Luck with the rest of your story.
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf On: July 31, 2004 02:03 CDT
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Thank you for the update. I am sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Cold Demon Lord On: July 31, 2004 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that Akumu He just doesn't give up does he. I have a feeling something bad is going to happen to Kagome, But I hope not.
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: July 31, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you got me really worried Kagome is with the wimpy wolf and Inuyasha doesn't have a clue as to what Kouga wants to do to Kagome. I absolutely love your story I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Elf On: July 31, 2004 01:56 CDT
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Oh no, Kouga took Kagome I hope Inuyasha gets her back, Please post more soon.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Pixie Elf On: July 20, 2004 02:11 CDT
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All I can really say is please update this story as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: July 20, 2004 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update, I have been waiting for it. I really do hope Koga won't really go after Kagome. Update soon.
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