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Reviewed By: Person- On: July 27, 2004 16:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hee hee hee "I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!"
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 21, 2004 17:41 CDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter! Loved the way you manipulated events to force Kagome to go with Sesshomaru like that. The only thing was how could you do that to Inuyasha and Miroku? Torture, yes. Demons, yes. But Shippo? That's too cruel. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 13:58 CDT Comment/Review: Lol,I hate the toad too! Too bad you didn't have Fluffy tear him in half,that would have been funny.
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 09:44 CDT Comment/Review: Jaken sucks. Damn toad...he needs to be be squashed. Oh, and Sess is so hot!! *thinking-->* He's MINE and no body else can have him!! I'll fight whoever wants to take him away! HAHAHAHA!!!!*end thinking* OK, anyway, Great chapter and update soon. :-)
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Title: he he he Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (I never log in...) On: July 20, 2004 21:04 CDT Comment/Review: I hate Jaken! He's just WAY too ugly to be with my sweet, sweet, Sesshoumaru *gets big eyes and looks off dreamily* Anyway, this is soooooo funny. but what's so bad about Shippo? @_@ I'm confused... Anyway, you should have more mind reading. And have her find the ability to be able to look through a person's mind, like look at his memories, or maybe subtly influence it... ^_~ Anyway, cya!
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:19 CDT Comment/Review: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Jaken was threatened!!! Stupid toad! KEEP UPDATING!
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Reviewed By: kawaii miko (not signed in) On: July 15, 2004 02:02 CDT Comment/Review: Hah! Naraku is conspiring with the jittry squirrel. But... will he only have one eye now since Kagome shot him? Hm... I'll have to wait and see! Awwe, poor Shippo. Kirara loathes him. I think the only two who truly don't though are Kagome and Sango. Oh I just thought of something. Wouldn't Miroku corrupt our innocent Kagome with his hentai thoughts? I mean, she's so pure, and he's so... not! Haha! Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl (not signed in) On: July 14, 2004 18:45 CDT Comment/Review: Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 14, 2004 18:21 CDT Comment/Review: Oh poot...Naraku has Akki. Of all the things that could have happened that was possibly the last one they needed. Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: July 14, 2004 17:19 CDT Comment/Review: I really like your story. The only thing I think you should do is make it so one night Inuyasha thinks that hes in love with Kagome and Kagome questions him about it forcing her to reveal that she can read peoples minds. Another thing I think you should do is make it so she can understand the youkai that they fight so that she can warn her friends of what the youkai is going to do next.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 16:05 CDT Comment/Review: About time that you wrote,damnit!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl (not signed in) On: July 12, 2004 20:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL!!!!!!! What you put in Sess' mind was hilarious! And Kagome blackmailing him with skin care products, classic. Update soon!!
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Title: LOL! Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 10:48 CDT Comment/Review: *laughs as hard as possible* OMG! this is so dang funny!.... Sesshoumaru and beauty products... Whodathunkit? Also, kawaii miko... The picture you gave me in my mind is hilarious... The hypeactive squirrel of doom... *giggles* Anywho, update real soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaii miko (not signed in) On: July 11, 2004 19:44 CDT Comment/Review: *snickers* evil hell squirrel. Someone should draw that. When I hear that, I think of some scrawny looking grey squirrely with these huge bloodshot eyes that's jittering and twitching like he's had WAY too much coffee! ^_^ It amuses me. But then again, I am easily amused. Good job! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 19:15 CDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter! Very, very amusing! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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