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Reviewed By: Lilmont On: April 28, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just dont see how sesshomaru is how he iz in this story its so diffrent it scares me. Sesshomaru could have at least did good in this battle but looked weak and pathetic while inuyasha was the sucessful one. i could see how inuyasha use the wind scar while sesshomaru use a equally powerful attack. but stilll good tho kontinue
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Reviewed By: Holy Shit On: April 25, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant even think of any thing to say im a crying mess im glad the second part will be posted on ff.net i have an account there and Holy Shit this is sooooo great your ff.net name is the same as here right well ill look for you cant wait untill the next part of the story so maybe i can stop crying!!
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Title: uhhh
Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, not to be rude, but i think you didn't really capture Sesshoumaru's character quite good enough. Sesshy is my fav character and i think he has alot more dignity (in his mind) to not join Inu and gang to go fight that squirrel...like for example, when you hav Kagome read Sessh's minds the 1st time, that was just stupid to make him be thinking about how hideous the backpack looked on Inuyasha and about his complextion...like, come on? if it was a joke, then it wasn't really funny. i'm not trying to be mean, i thought the story was pretty good, i really enjoyed it, but i hope you really work on Sesshoumaru's character a little bit:$ can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! when are you going to updat ebecause you should updat ever soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 22:12 CDT
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This is the funnyest story i ever read you are realy good at this. so please wright more because im laghing so hard my cheeks hurt
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Title: I love your work
Reviewed By: SEX KITTEN On: October 11, 2004 14:55 CDT
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THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER ITS SO FUCKING FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work and i look forward to the upcomming chapters and keep writing!!! ^_^ luv ya, phrisky
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 06, 2004 17:27 CDT
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Excellent once again, love all the little moment you had there. Really look forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 06, 2004 17:18 CDT
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RTOTFLOL! That was fantastic! A truely excellemt piece of humor. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 06, 2004 17:14 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 19, 2004 17:37 CDT
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First things first, excellent chapter. Glad to see those two getting on a bit better. Two, sorry for the delay, still trying to sort myself out after the time shift. Third, I was in Tokyo in Shibuya (Spelling?). I was attending a conference at Keio University. Spent most of time there so didn't get to see much though. The only things I would say are make sure to know where you are going as there are no street names and finding anywhere is near impossible without a map and two, knowing a little Japanese might help as very few people speak english. Other than that beware the vending machines, they seem to be everywhere and I suspect that it might be an invasion... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sexy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think your story is AWESOME...i cant believe that Inuyasha ACTUALLY THANKED Sesshomaru this story is SO COOL (but when are u going to start making Inuyasha and Kagome show there feelings for eachother!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!(PLEASE TELL ME ITS SOON)) lemmie kno when u update next luv ya, phrisky
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Reviewed By: swan On: September 16, 2004 00:00 CDT
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hey..nice story..ur doing a great job...keeep up the good work..even thought shess is out of character still its great... haha and i love how sango's temper can get so high so fast...oh and eventhough inu is kinda stupid i still like him in the story....and i loved shippo's reveng...haha...keep up the good work u doing great....keep on writing until next time..oh and i hope u put bit more of inu and kag in future chaps..keep it up...bye...:P..
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 13, 2004 01:06 CDT
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Hi, sprry for the delay, been in Japan. Excellent chapter! I loved Shippo's revenge, shame that no-one else will get to see it...I can't help but wonder what will happen to Kagome now...sounded like trouble. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Esha a.k.a. Kouga_Lover_3056 On: September 10, 2004 17:51 CDT
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Awesome chappie! Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl (not signed in) On: September 05, 2004 10:26 CDT
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I like Shippo's revenge! Haha. Inu Yasha and Miroku deserved it. And I can velieve that Naraku has thoughts of 'being the prettiest and strongest around.' Great chapter! Update soon!!!!
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