| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: Paigeypoo On: March 31, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a magnificent writer.So much love, so much commitment!!!!*sniffle sniffle*. And before and after each chapter you would allways talk about...ya know stuff. I couldn't really imagine Inuyasha saying "my love" or "dear" but anyways....I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES.You are one of the few ppls who keep creativity(of inuyasha)and love in your heart and 4 that I SALUTE THE!!!!!!!*tear*YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kyte On: March 27, 2005 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, I Yahoo messaged you a couple of days back, but don't know whether or not you got the message. I really like the story and is up to the tenth chapter. I'm having problem continuing the fic because I'm not sure if there are words missing from chapter 10 (I didn't read anything about Inu Yasha's secret being revealed) or did the chapter end that way because it was intentional? Anyway hope you reply to me through here or YM 'kyteaura' so I can finally continue at peace. I don't like missing any of the action =)
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Reviewed By: Fia-chan On: March 22, 2005 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just luv this and all your other amazing works! WAIIIIIII! I'm a little hiper right now! Tee-hee! Your fanfic(s) are always so original and eloquently written! Every time I read anything you've written, I usually need a tissue box nearby! And beleive me, barely anything anyone writes gets me emotional! By the way, I'm really sad that Fanfiction deleted this lovely piece of artwork, and I'm hoping that you'll contine it on this site! *authoress sees brown, shining, adorable puppy eyes staring at her admiringly and imploringly* And guess what? I've never met anyone who could resist the curse of the adorable puppy dog eyes. MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose Healer On: March 19, 2005 10:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story very much, but will story finish? please continue story until very end :(
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Trigga1719 On: March 12, 2005 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story especially the descriptivness. The spelling was ok but a few errors. (As you can probably see, I can't spell very well!) The story is very, very good and creative. I'm a huge InuYasha fan! My friend (who is also a huge Inuyasha fan) read chapter 15 (I printed it off for her) and now she can't get enough of your story. Thanks for the awesome story! Plz, oh plz write the end, I can't stand the excitment! Thanks again, Trigga.
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Reviewed By: demongirl407 On: March 07, 2005 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story and the part when miroku chased sango. and kagome hit Inuasha
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Reviewed By: Strobonar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it LOVED IT LOVED IT, but when are you going to finish it!!!! -Strobonar
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Title: Well?
Reviewed By: WingedGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Are you putting anymore up? It's been a while hasnt it?
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Reviewed By: Manderz On: February 27, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I share many of your beliefs. Such as waiting for marrige. I plan on doing so, my cousin and I made a promise we would wait til' after marrige. Even though I'm only 13. I am a Christian and it's nice to see others writing Fan fics like this. Thank you for standing up for what you belive in! God Bless! Amanda
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Title: a person?
Reviewed By: Princess_Laura On: February 23, 2005 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVES IT!!!!! lol, I hope you update soon, because I am REALLY into this story, thought the spelling/grammar and watnot was a little hard to understand sometimes, it all made sense in the end GO YOU! lol amazing job and I loved the pictures that went with this fic, you are a really good artist (you could totally kill me in a drawing contest! lol) well, that's all I have to say besides I CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! but I already said that at the beginning so just ignore that lol ttyl, TTFN!!!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: CrystalEyedYasha(Not logged on) On: February 20, 2005 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I love your story and your art!!! I really wanted to see those videos that you talk about so much but when i went to the link yesterday, you put up that you had to move it. I really want to see how they are but anywayz, I LOVED YOUR PIRATE STORY, ITS SO CUTE!!!! -Annie-
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Title: OMG I SOOOOOOO LUV IT
Reviewed By: Haley On: February 19, 2005 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH I LUV IT I LUV IT!!!!!!!! CAN"T HELP IT!!!!!! sorry it is soooooooooooooooo awsome
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Title: Luv it!
Reviewed By: ~Kagome~ On: February 07, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I absolutely LOVE your fan fic! Sometimes your writeing confuses me a bit... but it's ok sence I LOVE your story! ^-^ I enjoy reading this book, it's definetly something new!! I LOVE the way you kept the Japanese characters, yet mixed them with the pirate setting! ^-^ Awsome!! I give you 1,000,000,000,000 out of 1,000,000,000,000!!!!!!! Which means.... you ROCK!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I mean it!! ^-^ Once again... I LOVE your fan fic, I'm your biggest fan!! signed, ~Kagome~ AKA your biggest fan in the history of fandom!!!!! >_> See ya laters!!! Write more SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm begging you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets on hands and knees and begs.* ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! Well anyways.. good bye for now!! ^-^
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Title: Silver Dog Demon
Reviewed By: Silver D. On: January 28, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great writing style. You had a few grammatical errors. For creativity I gave you a 9 because it's Inuyasha so you can only go so far with originality. Otherwise creativity is great. It's completely different from the Inuyasha series. I like the different time periond and the story line definitely creative. Although it sounds a little like Pirates of the Caribbean. You keep me entertained and I look forward to more. I wonder what Inuyasha wants to do with the jewel? Well, please update soon so we can find out k? Thanks!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great story! What happened to the chapter where InuYasha goes Youkai and tries to rape Kagome. It isn't on here, and I am so confused. Other than that, this story kicks a**!
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