| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihanah(too lazy to sign in) On: January 14, 2005 11:46 CST
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I love this story. I usually don't like when the characters are transplanted somewhere, but this one was really good. I think the scene where he finally gets soft..in the hot spring..is probablythe most funny in the story. I laughed so hard, once I got over the kawaii ness of it. I hope your health improves.
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Reviewed By: dog_eared_freak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:10 CST
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great job, hope you update soon ja!
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Reviewed By: kagomeluvsinu On: December 12, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED your stori!!!!!!!!!!! :D it was awsome!kawii!!
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Title: Kagome and the Pirate Captain,The Silver Hanyou(old version)
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: December 10, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it I'll look it up on fanfiction.net anyway keep up the good work.BYE!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: akiido_lover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome fanfic! Hey why did you delete the newer version. I gave you a 10 in spelling and grammer because I'm not much at them either sometimes I can't even spell the simplist words. I think that it was really different than the pirates of the Carrabean. So keep writing it you're very talented and not many people can make tow people hate each other and then fall hoplessly in love without confusing the hell out of people. so come on keep writing I must know the end so come on think about it please. Just keep on posting if you do that then i will keep on reviewing your story.
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Title: Report
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotten some "Has to many similarities to Pirates of the Caribean".... I STARTED TO WRITE THIS FIC BEFORE THAT CAME OUT AND I DIDN"T SEE THE BLASTED MOVIE TILL AFTER I FINISHED 22!!!! So everything came from my mind, not copying anything!!!!!! But I'm still working on the revision and drawing more art. till next time taataa. yahoo: inuyashaz_kagome....email sailorx@hanson.net
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Reviewed By: AngelofLight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic, i love it!
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Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:54 CDT
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Good, except 15 IS just about right. Back then their life expectancy is very short. 35 years to 45 years. See? So they had to "start early" and stuff. Age 13 you're just a wee bit too young to have a child, but it happened even that young. Other than that, it's great. I'm still waiting for the revised version on fanfiction.net. ^_^
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Reviewed By: C On: August 23, 2004 14:50 CDT
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yeah!!!!!!!!! luv ur story! ^^ i just adore pirates, eww i nvr knew that houga could b so sick and demandin, that was xpected of naraku tho... i like ur usage of other languages. ^^ tata
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enojoy readinmg this tory i hope you still continue it
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:14 CDT
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COOL FIC! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: 1Inufan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 21:48 CDT
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FINALLY DONE! Took me freaking 4 hrs to read it. worth it though. This was excellent! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! O in one of your chapters you put Sesshomaru told something to Sesshomaru. ^_^ sorryz to spoil anything. i can't wait for more!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is everything I had thought it would be just from looking at the pic you drew! I tell ya, I have to read your other fics too! I waited soo long to read this one, and I'm reading like over 100 fics, it feels like, and I was soo siked to see that you had re-released the old version of this fic. I love pirate stories, and this one is my fave so far! Man, Inu sounds really yummy, doesn't he? Thanks for allowing us to read it again! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:44 CDT
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great fanfic..please update soon?..we would love to see what is going to happen next...this is great..keep up the great work..
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've finally read this story! Yay! You see, originally, I had this story on my favorite's list on ff.net but I never read it! Weird? Yes. Why? Because I wanted to leave it for another day to read when I had the time. And now that I have the time, I read it! And it was great! Well... the plot and idea was great anyway. I really don't mean to be mean, but you shouldn't try to write a book. Your grammar and especially your spelling is horrific. If you use Microsoft Word, which most computers have, it will give you spell/grammar check and you will seriously be amazed about the number of mistakes. I know you don't mean to make the mistakes, but it's okay. You should get a beta. It would help a lot. Before you correct anything else, check out your 'too' and 'to's. You've gotten a lot of those mixed up. Just check up dictionary.com should help. Other than that, I really really like this fic! The originality I rated a bit lower because it had too much of a similarity to Pirates of the Carribean, but I still like the idea! And, god, the romance! I loved it! You could really see Inuyasha's attraction developing and then *boom!* they're together! It's so cute!! I loved it! And I'm really glad you made Kikyou a thing of the past and not something to interfere with Inuyasha and Kagome's future. And I totally loved your pic! It was awesome even if Kagome was a little too busty. Btw, sorry for being harsh in the review; just some constructive criticism. Update soon! ~cattykit~ |
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