| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:14 CDT
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COOL FIC! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: 1Inufan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 21:48 CDT
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FINALLY DONE! Took me freaking 4 hrs to read it. worth it though. This was excellent! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! O in one of your chapters you put Sesshomaru told something to Sesshomaru. ^_^ sorryz to spoil anything. i can't wait for more!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is everything I had thought it would be just from looking at the pic you drew! I tell ya, I have to read your other fics too! I waited soo long to read this one, and I'm reading like over 100 fics, it feels like, and I was soo siked to see that you had re-released the old version of this fic. I love pirate stories, and this one is my fave so far! Man, Inu sounds really yummy, doesn't he? Thanks for allowing us to read it again! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:44 CDT
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great fanfic..please update soon?..we would love to see what is going to happen next...this is great..keep up the great work..
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've finally read this story! Yay! You see, originally, I had this story on my favorite's list on ff.net but I never read it! Weird? Yes. Why? Because I wanted to leave it for another day to read when I had the time. And now that I have the time, I read it! And it was great! Well... the plot and idea was great anyway. I really don't mean to be mean, but you shouldn't try to write a book. Your grammar and especially your spelling is horrific. If you use Microsoft Word, which most computers have, it will give you spell/grammar check and you will seriously be amazed about the number of mistakes. I know you don't mean to make the mistakes, but it's okay. You should get a beta. It would help a lot. Before you correct anything else, check out your 'too' and 'to's. You've gotten a lot of those mixed up. Just check up dictionary.com should help. Other than that, I really really like this fic! The originality I rated a bit lower because it had too much of a similarity to Pirates of the Carribean, but I still like the idea! And, god, the romance! I loved it! You could really see Inuyasha's attraction developing and then *boom!* they're together! It's so cute!! I loved it! And I'm really glad you made Kikyou a thing of the past and not something to interfere with Inuyasha and Kagome's future. And I totally loved your pic! It was awesome even if Kagome was a little too busty. Btw, sorry for being harsh in the review; just some constructive criticism. Update soon! ~cattykit~ |
Title: Kagome and the Pirate Captain,The Silver Hanyou
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: August 06, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!GREAT STORY I REALLY LOVED IT!WELL BYE SORRY FOR THE SHORT REVIEW BUT I'VE GOT OTHER THINGS TO DO.I'M GONNA LOOK UP YOUR NEW VERSION OF THIS STORY ON FANFICTION.NET LATER!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 06:51 CDT
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i like ur version just the way it is but if u must rewrite it then u must! just never forget the love!! and i love the plot line for the most part!
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Title: dose he talk to him self?
Reviewed By: IcyKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru whispered something to Sesshomaru??? who was Sesshomaru talking to?? i dont have any storys up yet, but i will soon *hopes*. *~*Icy*~*
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this STORY!!!!!!!!! PLEASE write more storys like this!!!!!!!GREAT JOB
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 16:44 CDT
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I'm still working on chpter 2
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Black Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are only five ways I like seeing Inuyasha is: As a pirate, in a rock band, cursed, a genie, or sweetharetd. You hit my very first one as a pirate. I absolutly love this story. keep writing you have talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:25 CDT
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i love it! but really, being the hentai and buddy of miroku... cant you change it to atleast rated R and put some lemon in there? lol, i'm sorry, it just seems too good. ^_^
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