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Reviewed By: Mo On: June 10, 2004 21:31 CDT
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MARRY HIM!!! ::coughs:: Well I have to admit this is sounds like a very good story, I can't wait where you take it. Oh, and your line about love not paying the bills... well my Latin teacher once said 'Love ain't gonna flush the toliet!' and I was reminded of that. Anyway I can't wait for you to continue! Will there be a lemon by the way?
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Reviewed By: wj On: June 10, 2004 20:50 CDT
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I love your stories, Lara. I'm watching for updates. I hope that active muse stays hyper! :)
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I guess you have made more... and I LOVE your stories. Not just the lemon parts, just how everything fits in perfectly and I can picture it and hear the characters saying it. You are no one of my favorite authors!
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: June 10, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love it. She should marry him and make him suffer. I hopr you update soon. You rock.
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Reviewed By: inyasha_luver_4life On: June 07, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start! update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: June 06, 2004 14:31 CDT
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wow... update soon!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!this is really good!!! just hope the rest will be this good or better...
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. this is pretty cool so far! I'm really enjoying this! I can't wait untill you post more!
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Erikah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good story. I haven't ran across any other stories that resembles the plot that you're using so I really didn't rate you on your originality. My thoughts were only revolving around the creativity part of your story...and...well...I guess that's it ^_^; I've read only one of your stories all the way through from beginning to end, and that was "People Involved". I scanned through "Relinquished Destiny" in order to get a good idea what the main focus in that story is, but that was it. To me, you're a great writer, but there comes to certain times where I feel as if the writing is a little too stiff and *cough* kinda flowery. I'm still trying to transform my writing since simplicity (when it comes to my writing style) is a word far unknown. There were just some words in most of your sentences where I found myself frowning and stopping to replace the word with another one. Let's just say that they were pretty large and close to sounding scientific to where smaller words could've grasped far more images. But you're older than me. Comparing my writing style to yours is an...intricate process ^_^; aheh...heh? Anyways, good luck with this story! I'm really looking forward to your next installment. Soooo...until the next time ^_~ Erika N.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 04, 2004 15:11 CDT
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oooh. I like your story, it's getting really interesting. =) keep updating please!
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Title: paper moon
Reviewed By: kay kay On: June 04, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this story is going to turn out to be a wonderful one. keep it up. i hope to see more chapters very soon because i'm already hooked. great job!
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Reviewed By: psycolday101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.
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Reviewed By: psycolday101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:05 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rating is a 10+ This is the best story i've read lately. I love the plot and the direction is very original. I also like that you didn't use a really cheesy (unoriginal) last name. Hope you update soon. Love it. Keep it up.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice start, and I must admit, I find it interesting. I like the idea of them marrying for somthing other than love...I have a similar situation in one of my fan fics. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:46 CDT
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I'm glad to see you posting your stories here, Lara. And I hope you update this one soon! I just love your lemons! ;) --wj
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