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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this. She should Marry him, then Kill him. Or maybe the other way around. Anyway, I cant' wait for the next chapter ^__^
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Reviewed By: inu lover554 On: June 29, 2004 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love dis story please update soon as fo da question iono
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Title: Papermoon
Reviewed By: ariespentacle On: June 25, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more
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Reviewed By: thekoostuff On: June 21, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wonder if kagome will call...hmMmMm>....of course she will! *winks* well great job so far! looking foward to your next chapter! =]
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Reviewed By: inyasha_luver_4life On: June 21, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoooooooa great chapter...i find this story to be turning interesting...keep it up ^_^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad to see your writing! I've been a fan of your Gundam Wing work for years, and I am sure I won't be disapointed with this. Such a interesting beginning. Really interesting, hopefully even more so in the future purhaps? ^____^ *waves little happy flags* Lara loves my two fav fandoms, now do some Please Save my Earth, a little Ranma, some Mars, and Witch Hunter Robin and I think I might wurship you. ^_~ Well really just please don't stop writing because you Fablespinner and Gina Lin (MindMelda), are my three fav fan writers. Thank you so much for letting me enjoy your work for so long. ^_^ Sincerely, Booky
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Reviewed By: nim On: June 13, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think after that Kagome should torture him before she agrees to anything. Yeah. Anyway love you stor.
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm happy I went back to actually find new stories. This is an interesting little idea. I would like to see this one continued.
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Reviewed By: Chingy's Bitch On: June 12, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kag should marry inu it would make me very happy:)
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Reviewed By: level 3 On: June 12, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MARRY HIM! then kill him....bwahahahaha
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Reviewed By: Jacqueline On: June 11, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely marry, because then there would not only be more wonderful insults, but also that odd, frustrated sexual tension, that they both deny, as well! Lol, well, whatever happens, Inu-yasha needs a serious ass kicking. Love the story, by the way, very witty!
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Reviewed By: luna chick (not signed in) On: June 11, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice turn. As entertaining to have her kill him, wouldn't that hinder the plot. Unless Sess is willing to revive him.
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: June 11, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story seems common but I like your style, in other words, its not boring! I'm always inukag, but right now, she should just dump him! Well maybe make him really suffer before she forgives...:)
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Title: Loving It!!!
Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: June 11, 2004 10:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know what would be really funny? kagome should get with sesshomaru. how about that for a blow to inuyasha's ego? no, but seriously. i really love this story and it's written so well. i hate it when you read fics and it's as if the authors skipped out on english class. that drives me insane. i think that kagome should make inuyasha pay for doing this to her, and then after he's been tortured enough, they can fall in love and get married. he just needs to learn his lesson first. he's too selfish. he needs to learn that money isn't everything. so, i say screw around with him for a little while. there's my input. KEEP UPDATING!!!
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Title: Off with his HEAD!!
Reviewed By: Briar On: June 11, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Off with his head!!!!! Preferably the one he uses the most. *smirks* Annnd may actually miss. I'd kick the bastard's ass for proposing something like that and pushing it. . . he is going to push the issue right? Can't say it wouldn't be tempting though. Can't wait for the next!
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