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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You MUST update soon. Great writing. Love the story so far, btw, InuYasha's an ass..lol..he's perfect. But I can't help but think that he's goin to think that Kagome's only marrying him for herself..she's not going to tell him about her mom and brother, is she...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 17:44 CDT
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yo. ^_^ i love this story, and quite a few of your other ones. so...update please??
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Title: why'd you stop
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you stop writing. this story was so good. will you ever finish it?
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Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i absolutly adore ur stories and really hope u'll update soon :DDDDD Teresa
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 17:25 CST
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PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ update............I beg you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really good update update update......plz
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:33 CST
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eeee!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE. it's been SOO long!!! please update...i'm dying of suspense. i'm a huge fan of your work, which means you need to finish it. xD i love this story! n____n
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Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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super work! i love the plot and it's just so interesting! hope u find time to UPDATE this fic...it has been a LONG time anyways keep up the great work and i really did a visual of Naraku...tehe...
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 17:01 CDT
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Well, I gave this story a chance because I'd liked "People Involved" so bloody much. Ehh...it didn't make me jump up and down like your previous AU, but your writing style is so engaging, I couldn't help but plod along. Can you tell that I didn't like it but that I'm trying to give it a shot at being nice about it? Anyway, I'll keep it in mind if you write furthur chappies. Maybe it'll get better....
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Title: WHY?!
Reviewed By: Midnight1212 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my god this is such a geat story so please update soon befoe i die if frustration or of suspense and stuff.PPPLEESAE update
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your fic! Good plot. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 22:29 CDT
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way awesome plot! hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: cherios On: July 18, 2004 08:13 CDT
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good plot love ur story please update soon
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 16, 2004 19:51 CDT
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nice update. =)
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 16, 2004 17:18 CDT
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awesome!!! keep updating!!! i love this fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:23 CDT
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She should definatly kill him... just kidding. If he really needed her help, he would offer more than she think he would. Five million dollars does sound like a lot, but people are foolish and waste it. How would she know that she'll be fine and dandy after they divorce? (Of course they're goning to marry.) He should also offer to provide for her after they divorce...IF they divorce. That way she won't feel so used. But these are just thoughts of a deprived, poor, lonely, naïve girl. Please continue and don't let anyone discourage you. Flame your flamers and reward your praisers. :-)
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