| "I think I better leave right now" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOWWW! This is the BEST fic I've ever read!!!!!!! Please, update soon!!!!!!! ~*~ AnonymousKitsune ~*~
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Reviewed By: HiroNoTenchi On: July 28, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As Phsychobratt stated, I'm not one for yaoi fanfics, but yours is very sensitive to the nature of the characters . I really enjoyed and appreciated the way you described Naruto's sensitivity and how you gave him depth . I felt that you accurately portrayed all of the characters, except for maybe Hinata at times. I don't know why, but I just don't imagine her as ever being someone whom would say "damn" or "hell." Every once and awhile I saw a few mistakes in grammar or spelling, but overall your story is very enjoyable. Keep up the good work, and update soon! PS--I really like the coupling of Ino and Shikamaru, if you find another opportunity to write about them, please do.
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Reviewed By: Louise On: July 25, 2004 13:21 CDT
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This is a pretty good fic. Can't wait to see what'll happen next =D
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Nanashi1 On: July 23, 2004 05:29 CDT
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I love this fic. I can't wait for more. More Soon Please?
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Hey, I really love this fic. I got all mad waiting for you to update, then realized you had this same story on FF.net, so I went there instead. Anyways, congrats for the fab writing, and I hope you finish the story soon; I really am excited, and it's taking all my self-control not to start jumping up and down like a crazy monkey while waiting for you to update!!!
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Reviewed By: Nony On: July 10, 2004 22:17 CDT
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@_@ Sasuke is sexy when he talks dirty. Updaaaaaaate.
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Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: FFantasy On: July 09, 2004 22:06 CDT
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This is such a great fic!!! Please write more!
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Title: uhuuu???
Reviewed By: shourin On: July 05, 2004 05:18 CDT
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i've been waiting for your new chappie for soooo longggg... so... will you write the next chappie... ok... i know how to do it.... * shourin pour a bucket of chocolate shaped chibi sasuke* its alll for you!!! noww... back to business... write another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: bluesnarf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lord, I'm so confused.. what happened between Sasuke and Naruto in the past?! What's going on?! I hope another chappie's on the way that'll shed more light on this subject coz I'm dying to know!
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Reviewed By: Kai14 On: June 23, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY WHY WHY did u make it and at sasuke being at narutos apartment, ooohhh i hate u for that (not really) updatse soon or *mutter mutter* ull regret it! neway good job keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt (too lazy to login) On: June 15, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Hey, great! you updated! Awesome. I really love this story. And though I'm not really into SasuNaru - are any guy on guy fic for that matter - I really like this story. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: rxcrocke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. The new additions are nice and add to the story without seeming new. Is the ending going to be the same or are you going to change it? A very enjoyable read.
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Reviewed By: Blue Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Wow, this is great! Thanks for updating! Sorry I haven't reviewed before. Really, I am! I totally love this story! Please, please, PLEASE! update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yaoilover S! On: June 12, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic as always,Hope you add the other 17 soon! But wow, I didn't know you knew about this website. I was gonna tell you on my next e-male to write your N-17 fics here. Speaking of witch did you get my e-male?
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:21 CDT
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Awww, so sad. Naruto-kun is hurt. Oh well, update soon. Bye.
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