| "I think I better leave right now" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 23:22 CST
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wow. i am up to chapter 11 and thought i would review which i dont do very often. but this story is fantastic! a little sad though. makes me wonder how it is going to end. truly fabulous work there though. the stuff down the bottom is hell funny too! great jod.
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Title: hey everyone! look! here!!!
Reviewed By: -fake-wings- [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 09:14 CDT
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ok, for all of you who have just recently read what's left of the story HERE go to fanfiction.net to read the finished product! trust me, you WON'T be disappointed!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 22:44 CST
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Hey, good story so far though it seems it's been a while since you posted a new chapter. It's got a good plot and you should stick to it and tie up all ends of this plot. Anyways, also with chapter 12 it seems that there is a format problem, you may want to fix it, it's a pain to read though i read it anyways 'cause I wanted to know what happened next. Anyways, hope to see any updated chapter soon! SO until next time. Ja ne! Fujinakaheero
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story.. I was wondering... are you going to update anytime soon or should I wait a few more years for another chapter?
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 13:37 CDT
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nevermind! i just found the rest of this story up on fanfiction.net. for those who want to read the rest, the link to chapter 13 is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1893799/13/ YAY!!!
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more! i have to know what happens! *hyperventilating* this story is really good. i LOVE naruto/sasuke pairings, and this one is so in character that i can't help but be impressed. the lemon was really good, too. *grins evilly* poor sakura... will lee be there for her to pick up the pieces of her broken heart?
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Reviewed By: yamashita-asuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this tory is really good and i think you should continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yay to sasunaru pairings^^
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Reviewed By: Lady_Mashala On: May 04, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOVE it and I can't wait to read more of this terrific fanfic!! MORE!!! And it need some more *cough* SasuNaru smut *cough* ^_^ Can you put me on the mailing list. Lady_Mashala@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: KuraResa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really great. I like how you explore the characters thoughts. Nicely written. Keep up the great work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 10:45 CDT
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Dude that was awesome! It was kind of sad, but also good to see Naruto caring so much for Sakura, I'm really getting sick of those stupid fics that turn her into a scary bitch that's willing to do all sorts of horrible things to get what she want. I've read a few like that that were well written, but for the most part I'm so tired of them. Was definitely a good chapter, nothing wrong with filler, was very informative, which was nice, though I can't wait for the next chapter (which sounds like it will be even MORE informative), so PLEASE update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Agacissko On: February 27, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nyaa!!! u re the best narufic writer!! please, nooo i beg ya - update as soon as U can :D im so damn curious what will happen next! ugh, its cruel ending up in such a moment, You know? :D i really enjoyed the fic! it absorbed meh completly and i hope to read new chapter soon :D pleaaaaaasssssssseeeee!!!!!!!! ^^ (sorry for my engrish :P)
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Danya_Fyra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome...I can't wait to see what you come up with next! So Update as soon as you can...!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 21:45 CST
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Wow. Great story. So what happens now?
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 21:57 CST
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please update! it has een so long since you have!:'(i luv your story soooo much!
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Reviewed By: dagna On: October 03, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaiiiiieee. You gotta write more!. Oh, poor Naruto!! *Sob* LOVE IT! Please write more soon. You got a new and very hooked reader.
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