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| "Final Understanding" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: July 28, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happened?? i can't read the first word in any of the sentances!PLEASE FIX IT! it's such a good idea!
| Title: same idea
Reviewed By: fungrl515 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
This idea has been used constantly. that's probably the only fault in it though. i like how it's written, and you've made little parts that seem to be truly your own. Although you took a common story idea, you made it your own in a unique way that's enjoyable. I must say, though, that I can't read the whole story. A word or so is cut off from the left margin. I don't know why this is, as it's never happened with any other stories, but this makes it difficult to read. I hope you don't feel that this is a flame, though it would have been better for you to have come up with a new idea. oh well... good job. The thing is, the other fics that I have read were by an amazing author who puts everyone else's stories to shame. If you haven't already, I suggest you read stories by Rozefire, Keolla, and "Broken Pieces" by Linay on ff.net. This might help you fix some little problems in your writing, as well as give you a whole new view on writing.
| Reviewed By: MissNikki On: June 10, 2004 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay...I have a story similar to this one...well...not really. It's called Reversed Roles and it kinda explores how InuYasha treats them differently. Well anyway love the story and update soon...or when ever you can...you know since the author's note in simple teasing...I guess that would apply to this one too, huh? well anyway love MN
| Reviewed By: antisocial min t(notl ogged in) On: June 09, 2004 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite interesting, i haven't seen a story like this yet, i think its quite well written. very interesting subject!
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 05, 2004 14:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting... Can't say more than that unless I get to read more of it. But it is good.
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