| "Love At First Type" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 14, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is kinda interesting...but in the last chapter, it was really hard to tell who was speaking and what they were saying. So you need quotation marks (") and paragraphs. Spaces too. Also, please don't use internet spelling. For example, "you" is spelled "you", not "u". It's kind of annoying when people do that. It would also be nice if you were more descriptive about things and you have spelling errors. Other than that, it's ok.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS PRETTY GOOD BUUUUT, THERE NEEDS TO BE SPACES AND TO KNOW WHO IS TALKING AND YOU NEED IT IN PARAGRAPHS
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Reviewed By: Comments On: June 14, 2004 09:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
'You' is spelled 'Y-O-U' NOT 'U'! Get it straight! Your netspeak is annoying!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to know who she is talking to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inazuma (from IY Group) On: June 09, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmm... this is an interesting story.. I normally don't read Inu-Yasha stories, but this one is cool. Just beware of spelling errors. (I think you mean 'chatroom,' not 'chartroom.') Also try to be more descriptive. Otherwise, update soon. ^_^
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Title: yayyy
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic but longer chapters is needed hint hint lol update soon
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