| "Marital Bliss" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: yeah!!
Reviewed By: yona admirer On: August 24, 2005 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's because this is one story that making the yoh-anna relationship..the REAL relationship ALIVE!!!! yeah! not made up loveteams ..the realistic ones!! yeah! email me ok? ayashiko_ojisan_15@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, i like it! you can rarly find one of these!
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Reviewed By: MagnumCloud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! if this is your first lemon then you did a damn good job! i hope to see more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nicely written and enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Inus Sex Slave On: August 01, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was good, im surprised tha, that was your first lemon... well good story! I really really liked it!
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