| ""Meilin's Jelousy"" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just say update and read one or more my stories please. thank you and update!
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Reviewed By: MizuYume [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hm, you could've made it longer and added more detail on her feelings.
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