| "Let Me Feel..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: September 10, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I was expecting lot lower quality fic than this. Very well written and both Temari and Gaara are IC... I could hear them saying the lines you wrote in my head. Too bad it's oneshot :( I'd love to read more. Nice that the fic deals whit temaris and gaaras sister/brother relationship, not many fics about that out there. Very nice style of writing you got, that's one thing that's hard to learn either you have good style of writing or not. Coulnd't find any typos either. I'll be sure to check your other fics. Sad to see that this good fic only had 1 review before this :/
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Reviewed By: darkie On: June 08, 2004 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! What an awesome fic! You had me crying at the end. Great characterization of both Temari and Gaara! Shame it's a one-shot. Write more of this kinda stuff!
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