Reviewed By: DPM On: April 29, 2005 22:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pick up yopur This is very different plot. The story line is very refreshing. Why don't you try to finish of that writin !!! I think so far you've kept both characters totally in alignment with what the original chapters!!! Looking forward to another chapter(s).
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