| "Of the Moon and the Wind" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 13:11 CST
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 15:43 CDT
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*twitch...twitch* when...are...you...going...to...update!?!?!?!?!?! i'me getting really bored just sitting here!!!! please update!!! ja ne, Tsuki-chan P.s. UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:58 CDT
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interesting.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's alright but not al thatr original. your grammar needs alot of work at times, but for the most part its pretty good. keep up the good work annd update soon.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 03:56 CDT
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This is cool so far. I look forward to reading future chapters! Good luck. Ja ne! ^.~
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:39 CDT
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NICE...very very NICE...I really liked this chapter...that was really great...wonder if they are gonna end up meeting w/Yuske and everyone else whenthey are doing their little experiment:D....Can't wait for the next chapter..This story is GREAT so far...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:17 CDT
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hehehe...that was AWESOME...I LOVED this chapter...oh man...that was so cool
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 23:46 CDT
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i think I like your 2 youkai...LOL...they are EVIL though...hehe:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 23:36 CDT
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oh man I forgot about Inu-Yasha's temper..hehehe...which is kinda ironic cause he shows it so much but still damn...couldn't he feel at least alittle bit guilty over knocking Kagome out???
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 23:24 CDT
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oh man oh man that was GOOD!!! but YIKES...poor Yuske....that just totally sucked right there...but YAY!!! good reason for them to be together w/o anyone cheating on anyone else and I mean hell why not Inu-yasha can be a bit thick at times:D
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Reviewed By: Solqua(unlogged) On: October 17, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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yeah, an update, im so happy you are continuing this story
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 12:18 CDT
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oh,yeah its spelled Kewabara or Kewahara (thats hoo they pronounce it in Japan
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 11:16 CDT
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the spellings are yusuke OR yuusuke not yuske, and its sango not songo
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 00:05 CDT
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i am so sorry that your computer died but it has been over a week and a ha;f sence thr review/comment by you Bye Bye
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 16:12 CDT
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Helloooooooooooo!! its me...sorry i have not reviewed!! i was just wondering...When the hell are you going to update!?!? sorry about the outburst, but i got annoyed with waiting!! sheesh, what happened to the patient me? well, please update soon!!!
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