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Reviewed By: DragonQueen Asia On: July 17, 2004 14:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU MUST KEEP UPDATING. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! PLEASE!?
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Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 08:55 CDT Comment/Review: so good, got to go now must read ch 2 before i die!!!!
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Title: only one Reviewed By: mlf On: July 05, 2004 17:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg i knew it...your good,but please don't kill him or his son.your soooo bad..lol maria update soon...
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Title: only one Reviewed By: mlf On: June 21, 2004 16:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow this story gets better and better.it has so much emotions that it cuts.please update soon....but i still feel that they are still alive out there somewhere.maria
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Title: only one Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 12:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow what a sad story..so much emotion and saddness..please let me know when you up date...i want to read more.but i can't believe the goku and the rest are dead...???????maria
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Title: woah! Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 16:32 CDT Comment/Review: geezums, you've got a flair for the dark story! I just read "Finding Peace" and I'm a little scared as to what's coming up in this one. I'm usually not a fan of death fics but I have to admit the high melodrama in this one got to me--probably bc the whole exchange btwn our favorite mated pair was so playful right before you lowered the boom. You can't bring her back, huh--she died of natural causes. Poor Veggie, poor Trunks. I really fear for what you're going to do to them in this fic! BUT I'm going to read it! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: June 08, 2004 23:01 CDT Comment/Review: indeed, what does happen next? *stares at you* how much longer until you update? huh huh huh huh? please? update? now?
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Title: starbrella Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:44 CDT Comment/Review: Wow Intense! I love this idea. SO what happnes next? Update soon!
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