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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Haaai. I looove your stories, but is it just me, or are you kinda evil against poor little Trunks? He aaaalways get i trouble in your stories...! hhee.. lol.. oh well, really love your story, though sometimes trunks is a little OOC, but you really do a good job on Vegeta, he's just like perfect. Love them. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: bvc On: April 23, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that had to be the most moving and incredible story i've ever read! I was practicly crying! YOu did a really good job on this! keeep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
grins uncontrollably. That was a perfect ending to a great fic. I love gow you let everyone believe he was going to die untill to paragraphs from the end. You didn't make it a sickly sweet ending, there is still pain that will take years to work through, but you gave the feeling of hope. I atually felt it when reading your story. Things like that story have happened to me (minus the aliens and space, you know) and it was amazing to actually get the feeling of hope that you portrayed with this dynamic story line (or maybe I'm just a sap). I disagree with the person who says it screams sequel, leave the story where it is. --You should however go back and edit it since you had minor technical problems... It was great!---30tan
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 03, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know this screams sequel right..i really so like your stories very muce there very touching and you can't help but fall in love with your stories.i'm sssooooo sorry that it's the end i do look forward to them.please remember me when you write more.i'm here to read them always...and you always put a smile on my face when i open up my e-mail and your update..i'll miss that...please keep writing always your BIGGEST FAN maria :)
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 18, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm crying here...what a great chapter..so strong..update soon.please don't let vegeta die.not know when they just found each other again and trunks...maria,,,,please!!!!!!!
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Title: wha--?
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is this chapter "Real" for real? If so, I am very pleased. I haven't been able to stop reading this fic but the darkness and angst was starting to get me depressed! Is it really Bulma? Wow, now I have hope! (and perhaps I shan't kill myself before your next installment!!) good work!
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 09, 2004 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a great true in events.i can't believe that she's alive.please explain how this is possible...i'm glad they have each other but i'm not sure how and why....please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:34 CDT
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wow lol i've been wanting 2 read this fic cause it instred me but i havent till 2 day and all i can say is holey shit! its great!! ah i love it ... i think that girl lady vataila wow cant spell dunt mind me but i have a feelin shes bulma cause of da bite mark n everhting... but who knows i could be wrong but i hope you write more and fast cause im in love w/ this fic!!!! so write more soon i'll be wating!
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Reviewed By: Mallie 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This is getting good! I hope you will tell us soon what really IS happening to Trunks!!! I am getting excited already for the next chappie!! Hope it comes soon. **Mallory**
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 04, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE MAKE IT STOP ALREADY. I CAN'T KEEP READIND THIS AND KNOWING THAT HE'S IN SO MUCH PAIN BOTH HIM AND TRUKS.IS THERE ANY BODY THERE TO HELP THEM.......update soon...maria
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 30, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as much as i want to hate her why are you doing this to him.and willanybody help him...please i can't stand to read about him like this....i know what this plant is but when will you free him..please update soon...maria
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Title: 0-0
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETAnotlogged in damnit On: July 27, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHHHHH!! DAMN!!!!!!!!! OH YOU BETTER UPDATE CAUSE I LOVE THIS DAMN STORY SO MUCH!!!!! OH WHATS GOING TO HAPEN NOW is VITALITY A BULMA TWIN???!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! WHRES TRUNKSIE POOHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! LATER! UPDATE >:D
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 26, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh why did you stop there.poor vegeta i don't know if he wants to be this why.i d=feel bad for him...i know why shes doing this but is it going to end...update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to update this faster! I'n really starting to like except for the SSJ3 part. Vegeta never had to go SSJ3 because he eventually surpassed the power that came with it without even going Super Saiya-jin. I dunno...that's just something I bitch about. But I do like this fic!
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 20, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i feel sooo sorry for vegeta.but i know that he put this upon his self.i just don't want to see him suffer much.but it's getting really good.please update soon.wow what a twist of events we have here..maria
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