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Reviewed By: Mallie 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This is getting good! I hope you will tell us soon what really IS happening to Trunks!!! I am getting excited already for the next chappie!! Hope it comes soon. **Mallory**
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 04, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE MAKE IT STOP ALREADY. I CAN'T KEEP READIND THIS AND KNOWING THAT HE'S IN SO MUCH PAIN BOTH HIM AND TRUKS.IS THERE ANY BODY THERE TO HELP THEM.......update soon...maria
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 30, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as much as i want to hate her why are you doing this to him.and willanybody help him...please i can't stand to read about him like this....i know what this plant is but when will you free him..please update soon...maria
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Title: 0-0
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETAnotlogged in damnit On: July 27, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHHHHH!! DAMN!!!!!!!!! OH YOU BETTER UPDATE CAUSE I LOVE THIS DAMN STORY SO MUCH!!!!! OH WHATS GOING TO HAPEN NOW is VITALITY A BULMA TWIN???!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! WHRES TRUNKSIE POOHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! LATER! UPDATE >:D
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 26, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh why did you stop there.poor vegeta i don't know if he wants to be this why.i d=feel bad for him...i know why shes doing this but is it going to end...update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 12:39 CDT
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You need to update this faster! I'n really starting to like except for the SSJ3 part. Vegeta never had to go SSJ3 because he eventually surpassed the power that came with it without even going Super Saiya-jin. I dunno...that's just something I bitch about. But I do like this fic!
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 20, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i feel sooo sorry for vegeta.but i know that he put this upon his self.i just don't want to see him suffer much.but it's getting really good.please update soon.wow what a twist of events we have here..maria
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Reviewed By: DragonQueen Asia On: July 17, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST KEEP UPDATING. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! PLEASE!?
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Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 08:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
so good, got to go now must read ch 2 before i die!!!!
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 05, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i knew it...your good,but please don't kill him or his son.your soooo bad..lol maria update soon...
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: mlf On: June 21, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story gets better and better.it has so much emotions that it cuts.please update soon....but i still feel that they are still alive out there somewhere.maria
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Title: only one
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a sad story..so much emotion and saddness..please let me know when you up date...i want to read more.but i can't believe the goku and the rest are dead...???????maria
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Title: woah!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
geezums, you've got a flair for the dark story! I just read "Finding Peace" and I'm a little scared as to what's coming up in this one. I'm usually not a fan of death fics but I have to admit the high melodrama in this one got to me--probably bc the whole exchange btwn our favorite mated pair was so playful right before you lowered the boom. You can't bring her back, huh--she died of natural causes. Poor Veggie, poor Trunks. I really fear for what you're going to do to them in this fic! BUT I'm going to read it! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: June 08, 2004 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
indeed, what does happen next? *stares at you* how much longer until you update? huh huh huh huh? please? update? now?
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow Intense! I love this idea. SO what happnes next? Update soon!
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