| "Lost and Found" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Blanket scenario as it should be
Reviewed By: sangohuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that's how blanket scenarios should be written! Lots of character development, detailed descriptions of their location, lots of historical and cultural research lend an air of authenticity. And you keep Megumi and Enishi so well in character. I certainly hope you'll write more about their relationship someday.
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Reviewed By: HandleMeGood On: November 25, 2004 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an exquisite story! I've never read Enishi/Megumi before, but you make the pairing seem so natural. After all, out of all the Kenshin-gumi, Megumi would be the most likely to understand Enishi's pain and struggles in the underworld he immersed himself in. Though the blanket-scenario is a bit cliche, I still love the intimacy and delicacy of thise entire piece, and couldn't help but sigh over the romanticism involved. Lovely! Please write more on this newly intriguing couple!
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Reviewed By: kamorgana1 On: July 12, 2004 06:33 CDT
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I finally get to review the lemon...though I'm still at loss for words. It's emotional but not too waff, and it's hot, hot, hot. I like that it's realistic in their reactions, how you deal with Megumi's past and fears, how you don't make a Lemon Superman out of Enishi. They're "human" (can I say that of fictional characters?)...and that's why we like them (^-^). Take care.
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Reviewed By: L. Sith On: July 09, 2004 22:00 CDT
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Waff and romance are good and appropriate for this story. If all romances are like Saitoh romances, the romance genre would have died. Nice chapter title for part 2.
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Reviewed By: L. Sith On: July 09, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Waff and romance are good and appropriate for this story. If all romances are like Saitoh romances, the romance genre would have died. Nice chapter title for part 2.
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Reviewed By: L. Sith On: July 09, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Waff and romance are good and appropriate for this story. If all romances are like Saitoh romances, the romance genre would have died. Nice chapter title for part 2.
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Reviewed By: L. Sith On: July 09, 2004 21:58 CDT
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Waff and romance are good and appropriate for this story. If all romances are like Saitoh romances, the romance genre would have died. Nice chapter title for part 2.
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Reviewed By: Mara Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 00:36 CDT
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I had hoped to find your chapter here, but no.... :-((. Anyway, keep up the good work! It is a wonderful story and very original. It is a gift to have your imagination and ability to write united in one person. I LOVE the lemon you sent me =^.^= Sorry for the uncontructive review... it is too early in the morning
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Reviewed By: Mara Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good fanfic your have here, good background. Your research is awesome as always. The characterisation is perfect, as Karina once put it with one of my stories (for Saito =^^=), I can only agree here: your're the best Enishi mind-dwelver in FF community. The same goes for Megumi as well here. I can perfectly imagine them in this way 5/6 years after Jinchuu. Please don't worry about English, you're improving from day to day (look who is talking here). I saw only two typos at first glance =^^=. If you check other fics, you can barely read one sentence (and the sentences are not as twisted as yours =^^=).
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Reviewed By: Kamorgana1 On: June 19, 2004 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again...hehehe, I couldn't help. I have to say again that this story is awesome. It's a delight to see someone really understanding Megumi and Enishi, and writing them IC instead of using the easy and wrong cliches of the unreedemable psycho and the eternal homewrecker. Megumi helped Kaoru with Kenshin after the Kyoto Ark, selflessly, Enishi saved Kaoru and understood his mistake... and still it isn't enough, sigh. Ah, I saw the other review. I can't speak for your English, not being a native, unlike your other beta-readers.But don't be too affected, it's still way better than these horrible people using fangirl Japanese every two words, rending their fics unreadable to us poor Japanese speakers. I know that you work hard on this and will try to improve again, if possible. I can't wait for the lemon, wondering which version you chose. Take care.
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