| "Twist of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Spikerix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get this fic outta here!!! Not only you gave it a FALSE status since it's not COMPLETE but you haven't updated it in THREE YEARS!!! It exists only to mock all readers who cross it!!
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Title: Great Style
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG IT'S BEEN?! Update please! Total cliffhanger if you didn't notice. I really like your style of writing, it really has an amazing fling to it. How he got flung back in time, how he wound up in the time of the Sandaime, how he's now 10 years old, and how he is completly confused as why the old hag wasn't there! I really like your plot line so far, and I don't wanna start continuing it for you! *laughs* Anyways, I'm hoping you update soon, looking forward to it! The reason I gave you a 5 on enjoyment is because you haven't updated in over 2 years. If you updated a little more then I would enjoy it a lot more. Here's hoping for an update! -Arenja
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Reviewed By: SanadaSayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 03:31 CDT
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O really can't wait to read more. You're doing great! Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 17:14 CST
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Interesting....I wonder what going to happen when Naruto meet Yondaime. I have some words to say to you.....UPDATE! Please?
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Title: asdf
Reviewed By: j0e-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowww... shit. GREAT potential... thoroughly enjoyable... i liked how your older naruto was still... mediocre? :p Can't wait till you update... you ARE plannign to... righT? -j0e
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Reviewed By: Little Fox Kit from fanfiction.net On: October 27, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. keep going
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Reviewed By: WookieeBeta On: October 07, 2004 21:01 CDT
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But...! But...! No! No ending! More! More now! Or there will be thwappage-ness in your future!
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Reviewed By: LadyWindelf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 18:24 CDT
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I like the idea of your story!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 13:33 CDT
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This might be fun. You wrote the first chapter well and set everything up nicely. Let those muses run free! cdk
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 21:53 CDT
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Will you look at that... I'm the first reviewer. Well, anyway... *yawns* other than the fact that this chapter was kinda short for my taste, it's pretty original. I've been wanting right a fic like that for a while... and now I guess I don't have to. From what you've written down so far, I think you did a good job in keeping Naruto and Tsunade in character - better than I would have done. Well, I should get going, update soon.
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