| "A Winter Time Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Seriously!?!
Reviewed By: foxy4ever duhh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
four years and you still don't know what you can do with it. wow, I think WinterWolf had it right. Then they can be rescued from the cave, even though there are never really caves on normal trails, and returned to civilization. Overall good story, but for some reason I don't see you finishing it.
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: July 10, 2004 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought about putting this bluntly but decided against it. They could have sex
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Reviewed By: ASYLUM1000 On: July 08, 2004 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story is not bad. You may want to consider starting a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. It helps with readability.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOT BAD
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I Love your your fic please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kitty ktisune On: June 28, 2004 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
2update this wonderful fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz |
Title: Like it so far :)
Reviewed By: Osato_Ningyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 11:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far! But why do you care why peopel where clothes that doesn't mach? And thats no reason to call them freaks! Not everyone cares 'bout what other people think, and i don't give them wrong why should you care, srew the world for as far as I like :P ... Anyways this review is 'bout the story whaha ... well i really like ita nd I hope you update soon! BYE K!$$3$
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Title: COOL!!!.... I mean.... COLD!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty(Nahhhhhh) On: June 28, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said, COOL, uh.... I mean.... COLD!!! Great stuff here!!! Oh, and, great Idea for the ski trip!! ME LIKY!!! Don't care how long it takes for you to update as long as you do!!!!!! But.... I would REALY perfer if its wasn't too long.... or your gonna KILL ME!!!!! Anyway, Great fic, great chap, love it, Vellakitty ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: war spirit of red and silver foxes On: June 26, 2004 11:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes no more waiting weve been waiting patiently and now you ow us update soon.
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 25, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sweet. i really liked that story. update asap.^_^
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: June 23, 2004 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
pleas finish the story when you come back
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Reviewed By: like fic On: June 23, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic I read your A/n and I was thinking you can update when you come back just a thought
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Reviewed By: Sean Malloy On: June 17, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story...update soon so we can see how the rest of the story goes...
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