| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: SWOTBWOT [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really is a marvel of writing, and your descriptive ability is especially excellent. It's also good to see Shuichi get the better of Eiri for once, since Yuki's obnoxious to him so often.
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 17:10 CDT
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*Sigh* Always cute every time I read it!..... lols the tape part always makes me laugh. Eiri's so lucrativley sexy!! I love him and his personality. Both Eiri and Shuichi are very much in character in this fic!
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Reviewed By: GravityPull too damn lazy to sign in On: February 06, 2005 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDDD omg i love the ending about Yuki knowing about the tape!! i almost died laughing!! oh man i loved this fic. this fic made my day XD. your writing in this fic was done so well. it was different and i loved it! keep writing Gravitation fics i'd loved to see more of your work!!
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!! At the end I almost died with Shuichi when Eiri made it clear that he had known about the tape the whole time! That was the funniest thing I've read all day and that is saying something! Lol that was such a great story!! Classic example of Yuki humouring Shuichi! Lol! Keep up the awsome work! ~Bakayasha~
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer On: January 24, 2005 11:52 CST
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That was easily one of the hottest things I've ever read. I loved the ending. He thought he was being pretty clever about that tape. ROFLMAO
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Reviewed By: Sakura Harusame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god... that was so hot! And the end was hilarious! Great job on it.
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*let's out a ragged sigh* That-was-awesome!! Description, wording, actions...honestly I'm having trouble finding ANYTHING wrong with it. I'd love it if you would write more of them...and now I'm going to run into my fantasy world and daydream about this fic and think up my own. It was great, really.
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Reviewed By: yume_mizaki On: September 07, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was totally excellent, i loved it! you should definately do more gravitation fics!
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Reviewed By: Ailanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! I absolutely loved it, and thank you SO MUCH for not saying "a mix of pain and pleasure"; it is so overdone, but you got the point across without being a cliche! Thank you so much. I hope you continue writing fics because your wording and imagery is absolutely perfect!!
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Reviewed By: Ayana On: June 13, 2004 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant ^-^ I love it!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 23:01 CDT
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I really loved this story. Please continue to write more Gravitation fics!
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Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't sign in... too lazy. BUT THIS STORY KICKED ARSE! I absolutely adored it and its raunchiness. MEOW! ^__^ Everythign was written very well and you kept the ball rolling without huge gaps. Great story and keep it up! - Echan2 ^_~
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