| "Convalescence" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: opps
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:54 CDT
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sry bout my mistype ****songo....... sey bout that i'm bad at typing !!!!! and i'm spelling is horrable ... well continue please!
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Title: continue please
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:50 CDT
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i am i'm total aggance with spyrofate and Rukusho100 ... i think u should continue no matter if it was just a one-shot continue i'll be ur #1 fan and i'll give u a COOKIE if u continue!!!! come one a COOKIE no one can resist the almighty COOKIE!!! ^^ i'm sure u will do great if u continue this fanfic i kno i will enjoy reading every last bit !!!! ^~ please continue dont leave me hanging with out a continuance i mean if u continue and u wright bout them telling songe and miroku then have her pregnante and then going to have the baby .... but where will they live if u ever plan on continuing then give me an e-mail at (lovebug248@kiwibox.com) again please continue i really wanna find out what happens and what koga thinks of them together and all that stuff !!!!!!!!!!!!!! come one a COOKIE i kno u can't resist a COOKIE no one can!!!!!!!!!! or if i'm on then IM SexySammers06.....,,,,, pleace out
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesum fanfic! very nice lemon! i congratulate yu!...uhm...about the continuing idea...i tink yu shood leave it at that...cuz thats wut one shots are basically for...but hey if yu wana then yu wana...wutever floats yur boat....anyway...awesum lemon!
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Reviewed By: Rukusho100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Kawii! I do agree with the last reviwer! You should continue...it would make a great story with tons of fluffy and lemmony goodness i bet!
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Title: my compliments
Reviewed By: spyrofate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY.....VERY.....VERY NICE!!!!!!!! lol. That was a truly awesome fic, and I would suggest continuing it actually into a story about their new lives, spreading the news to the others (Sango, Miroku, etc.), when Kagome's pregnant, etc... I know VERY well that their are quite a few of those already, but somehow I KNOW that YOU could make this just...an INCREDIBLE story!!!!!! I see no reason for you to stop here. I can already see the AMAZING amount of reviews you'll get if this were to be continued!! This little bit itself was just........FANTASTIC!!!! IMAGINE WHAT YOU COULD DO IF YOU CONTINUE!! THINK OF HOW MANY REVIEWS AND FANS YOU'LL HAVE!!!! IF YOU WANT......I'LL HELP YOU! LOL. I'll say this much, to impress ME.....ME.......this much, is incredible, and I would encourage you to see what you can really do to this. I think others would agree with me once they read this!! In the mean time, AWESOME JOB!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 01:15 CDT
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That was really sweet. I think it has to be the most romantic lemon I've ever read. Great job!
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