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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 15:05 CDT
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wow, this had to be one of the sweetest lemons I've read in a long time. You really grasped both of their characters, and the overwhealming fluff is long overdue in the InuYasha fanfiction nation. thank you, and I hope you get some more strokes of inspiration
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::Is still reviewing all your stories so she won't get hit with spatula:: Lol. Another favorite. Ahh how I love these fanfics. ::Dreamy eyes:: And the all mighty writer! ::Bows:: Write another soon! -Kagome0820
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Reviewed By: SRP On: May 16, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! OMFG! That was very good!!! I really liked how you made inuyasha all carring and gentle! OMG! I't was so sweet, it was enough to make me cry! *tear* lol
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Title: GOD
Reviewed By: Alanna(Reina Dai) On: May 02, 2005 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you Know how very irritated i am that you ended it with 'HE' why'd the helled you end it with 'he'? please fix it please!
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Reviewed By: forceofnature [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so so so so so so so good! Wow! Honestly I have no words, I think that this is the best one-shot I have ever read and I so excited to there is a sequel. I can't get over how lovely that was and I do like how you didn't bring up the Kikyou issue, I find many otherwise good fics will totally kill the mood by bringing her up, of Kagomes' family, etc. Amazing!
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Reviewed By: booferret On: September 06, 2004 22:49 CDT
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Great story I really enjoyed it I hope you do continue it I have to say I would have been a bit frazzled doing such things with other people sleeping not so far away ^_^; but it was really well done so incredibly sweet. Really great job for your first fic it was er... um.. HOT!
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 16:14 CDT
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That was your first Fanfic?! I hardly believe that! It was absolutely beautiful! Perfection!! not to mention incredibly hott!! Great job!!! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simpfan06 On: July 05, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job, especially for your first one. This is one of the best one-shots I have read. Also, your choice of words was excellent, it made the fic more fun to read. I loved it!
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Title: Nice story!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome My boyfirend thanx you for your good lemon! Love Demonicslayer GothgirlVA@aol.com
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH!! hella tight! god, i love the lemon. lol
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Title: good?
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um.... err.....good!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ Wow. Lol that was a GREAT lemon :D Meaning, I really liked this fic!!! I would of thought Koga would be gentler with the person he intended to make his mate... so If he ever decided to get together with Ayame, I kinda feel back for her lol BUT this is still an awsome one-shot :D ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word, only one word can describe how good this is: Perfect.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amasing.you have got to turn this into the begining of a full story wow that was great.
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Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:34 CDT
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You're gonna continue it, right?! I'll pitch in ice cream, LoveLorn! C'mon! Ice cream and cookies? Who could resist the tempation? It's just so cute and fuzzy. If you don't continue, I'll be forced to take drastic measures (such as taking all the sugar FOR MYSELF!). Meh, just PLEASE continue!
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